Title: Mine

Author: Ellafair Blase (hellocheeky)

Cover: the cover looks really good overall, and goes with the story. It's simple, yet it looks done by a professional!

Total: 5/5

Description: good job! It doesn't or feel too much about the book, and it gets me interested in your book! Well edited, and include elements of a description.

5/5

Title: simple, and relevant. Honestly, it doesn't need changing, it's perfect as it is.

5/5

Storyline: I was hope that first, but as time went on, it became confusing and I lost interest... I didn't really get what was happening since it went from talking about kidnapping to not seeing her brothers and a long time. I'm sure if I were to read the whole thing though it would come together.

3/5

Grammar,spelling, punctuation: there were a few mistakes throughout the book, but I will say you did used good synonyms for certain words, and there was a lot of really good figurative language involved.

4/5

Characters: I didn't connect much, mostly because I was too concerned about the storyline being store of confusing. If I was able to understand what was going on in the storyline I think I would have connected a lot more and felt the characters emotions. But on the other hand I still do feel like I felt the main characters emotion and understood what she was feeling.

3/5

Overall score: 25/30

Review done by That_Gamer_Kid