Author: @Vodenthehollow

Genre: Fantasy

Summary: Biden's the worst at living as a normal dragon.

He would be one if it wasn't for the Celestials' idea to gift him colorless and lackluster scales. Every dragon in Aurania knew that their scale color dictates their control over the elements and their Magic. And everybody could guess what element Voden. Wielded even before the Great Awakening had happened.

Voden controls... nothing.

No power. No element. Simply... nothing. It was as if the Celestials were making a funny joke out of him.

But everything changed on the day of the Awakening when two strangers arrived in town.

Strangers who taught Voden that controlling nothing... is simply everything.

Age Category: Young Adult

Chapters Reviewed:  11

•MY REVIEW•
•Category 1- cover & description•

The cover is extremely cool and professional.  The summary could use some work.  Maybe start with a very brief history of the town Aurania.
4/5

•Category 2- word choice, punctuation, grammar, spelling, sentence & paragraph structure•

I didn't see any punctuation or spelling errors.  The word choice is okay; it could be more intricate and diverse.
18/20

•Category 3- plot, setting, background/stories, characters•

There's not much to this novel yet.  The author seems to have a solid idea on the plot.  I still want more history on the town, elements, and the magic.
20/30

•Category 4- writing style & pace of the story•

The writing styles is okay and the pace of the book is a little slow.
8/15

•Category 5- details & descriptions•

There's one major issue I had with this novel.  The way the author describes the dragons' actions and appearances are very human-like.  While I was reading this book, I kept on forgetting that all the characters are actually dragons and not humans.  Find different descriptive words that best suit dragons.
8/20

•Category 6- originality & overall creativity•

Very creative and original. I'm intrigued to see where the author goes with this.
10/10

68/100