Author:  @bebedashuri

Genre: Romance/Action

Summary:  Ava just wanted one thing out of life: to be the heir of the family business. But when her father follows tradition, her pleading continuously gets ignored . However, this will all change one of the fateful night. When Ava's parents are killed, she was left with the one thing she wanted: leadership. But when Ava meets Osvaldo Martinez, son of the infamous Sebastion Martinez, will her father's prophecy come true?

Age Category:  Young Adult

Chapters Reviewed:  Completed Novel

•MY REVIEW•
•Category 1- cover & description•

The cover is cool, but it doesn't really go along with the story. Summary could be a little bit better.
2/5

•Category 2- word choice, punctuation, grammar, spelling, sentence & paragraph structure•

This novel does need quite a bit of editing. It's all a couple of typos and grammatical and punctuation errors.
10/20

•Category 3- plot, setting, background/stories, characters•

A very action packed storyline with just a touch of romance. I really do like all of the characters; they are all super unique. I just wish that there was more details with all of their backstories.

25/30

•Category 4- writing styles & pace of the story•

The pace of the story was a little slow. The writing style was decent.
10/15

•Category 5- details & descriptions•

The author definitely could've used more descriptive words. Other than that everything else was detailed well.
12/20

•Category 6- originality & overall creativity•

The plot line of the story is unique and all the characters are super original.
10/10

69/100