OBSTRUCTED HEART
Author: smritiagr
Genre: Romance
Age Category: Teen-Adult
Summary: Story revolves around Anika's life after she settles as a store owner, posterior to her parents demise. She raised her only sister, all by herself since she was 16.
After a few months of getting to know each other, Ketu proposed her for marriage. But, her love life, while many secrets unfold gradually, suffered the lack of strong bond.
Will Anika and Ketu endive this together?
Or will Ketu be an equivalent of a "ketu" in her kundali?
•MY REVIEW•
Category 1
Book cover and description
I really love the cover; but the description could be better.
4/5
Category 2
Word choice, punctuation, grammar, spelling, and sentence and paragraph structure
There is a couple of misplaced commas and some sentences could flow better. Overall, great descriptive words.
3.5/5
Category 3
Plot, setting, background/stories, and characters
The plot is okay but it wasn't interesting. It needs more background of some of the characters.
3/5
Category 4
Writing style and pace on the story
The pace of the story is slow.
2/5
Category 5
Details and descriptions
Every place is described in most perfect detail.
5/5
Category 6
Originality (overall creativity)
The writer could be more creative. Other than that it's a pretty good story so far.
4/5
TOTAL: 21.5/30 72%
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