BURNING AMBERS
Author: @Bellarina50
Genre: Fantasy
Summary: Wolves. They are the most powerful forest-dwelling creatures. So it only makes sense that millions of years ago, when the wolves' ancestors roamed this land, they had the power of the earth. The species eventually dies out until millions of years later, their successors emerged. They must all unite and eliminate their greatest enemy once and for all.
Age Category: Young Adult
Chapters Reviewed: 26 chapters
•MY REVIEW•
•Category 1- cover & description•
The cover is really cool and professional. The description could be a lot better.
3/5
•Category 2- word choice, punctuation, grammar, spelling, sentence & paragraph structure•
This book was a little bland. The word choice could definitely use some work, I did see some spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors.
12/20
•Category 3- plot, setting, background/stories, characters•
The author has a really good idea of what they want the plot to be, but it seems like they struggled to actually put it on paper. Some of the characters were hard to keep track of since there were so many. The plot really didn't make sense to me. It was like this whole battle was being fought but there wasn't any explanation for it.
5/30
•Category 4- writing styles & pace of the story•
There wasn't anything unique about this writing style. The pace of the story it's kind of slow.
10/15
•Category 5- details & descriptions•
The author could've definitely been more detailed with characters' appearances and the setting.
10/20
•Category 6- originality & overall creativity•
Yes, the story is original and it's creative, but it just wasn't written correctly.
10/10
50/100
Bạn đang đọc truyện trên: AzTruyen.Top