●Author: Chloe_Evans12

● Book Title: Rose

● Genre: Short Story

● Rating and Comments on Description: 9/10
The description is straight forward going into what the story will be about and introduces the main character Rose. The writer then continues to describe the characters appearance briefly as well as her personality which helps the readers get an understanding of Rose as a person.

● Chapter 1: 9/10
There is some great descriptive language used in this first chapter and the character is introduced beautifully with some detailed description. The writer gives away to the readers what the character is longing which is love, which is very relatable to reader's as we all just want love and to be loved. It's also very intriguing to me as a reader to discover whether or not Rose does get her love that she is longing, which makes me want to read on.

● Chapter 2: 9/10
So far in these two chapters I have read, I am finding it very easy to imagine what is going on and what the scene is that is taking place in the story. This is because the chapters are packed with so much imagery and Description it's like the words are painting the scene in my head. Description also creates a light mood for the reader, giving a positive impact to the story. Although there isn't a lot of action happening in the srory, I don't know whether this is intentional for the writer, so we will just have to wait and see if things pick up action-wise.

● Chapter 3: 8/10
In this chapter, the readers get to know a bit more about Rose's desires and wants which may help to empathise with her. Even though the description is still amazing as ever; which I cannot give enough credit to the reader for as it is something some writer's find trouble with, I find myself longing for some action to take place soon. However this may be different to other people's opinions and may just be me having a preference.

● Chapter 4: 9/10
There is some more physical description about Rose which is good for the readers to imagine her appearance. I am left feeling a little more satisfied as a reader as there's is a bit of interacting between Rose and another character who has been introduced. This helps reassure me that the story is going to go somewhere action-wise and we as reader's will get to see how Rose interacts with other characters.

● Overall opinion and rating out of 10: 9/10
There is a lot of descriptive language in this story which helps the reader imagine the scenes taking place in their head. The writer reveals Roses desires and wants as well as other little things about her, which makes her more relatable to reader's. Although at first I was worried about no action happening in the entirety of the book, the fact that there is interaction taking place between Rose and another newly introduced character gives me hope that there will be more to the story that just descriptive writing.