#12 The Miracle Flowers

Author: MickeyMouse189

● Book Title: The Miracle Flowers

● Genre: Fantasy

● Rating and Comments on Description: 9/10
The writer describes what sort of book the reader's will be diving into if they chose to read it, which is very helpful to the possible readers. The descritpion also briefly introduces the main character's, their purpose in the story and discretely explains the reason behind the story title.

● Chapter 1: 9/10
This chapter starts off with some really good description of each main character and describes the situation they are all in. The characters have been given different personalities which makes them more believable and lets the reader no doubt deciding which one they more relate to and is their favourite. We also start to understand each of the character's personalities and temperaments which are interesting to compare. There is some humour added to the Chapter which helps keep the story light hearted and engaging for the reader.

● Chapter 2: 9/10
This chapter is in one of the character's POV (Skylar)  that helps to get to know the character more personally. There is some good description used and the reader gets to know some background information about the character's past making them seem more like an individual instead of  just part of a group.

● Chapter 3: 8/10
In this chapter the writter has swapped POVs to another character (Isabella) in the group to get another perspective on the situation they all share. This helps the reader's to understand what's the characters different attitudes are like. In the other hand there are some minor grammar mistakes and isn't much detail in this chapter.

● Chapter 4: 9/10
There is no POV included in this chapter which gives the reader a look at what the overall situation is and see the character's collectively as a group. A good amount of detail is added about each character, keeping them all in the picture and the reader's up to date. A twist in the plot that takes place is sure to bring the characters all together. There is a mysterious mood about this chapter which makes the reader's want to continue the book.

● Chapter 5: 9/10
Although it isn't stayed that there is a specific characters pov, it is based mainly around one character in particular (Isabella). The main mission is set out in this character beginning the main accomplishment of the story. There's a bit of an internal battle with the characters fears and emotions, showing the reader's that the characters too have flaws, making them seem more human. We get to find out a bit about Isabella's past which isn't the best of ones, which shows the reader that nobody's life is perfect. This makes it easier for the reader to empathise and relate to Isabella says a character and help build a bond between character and reader.

● Overall opinion and rating out of 10: 9/10
Although there are a few errors that need correcting and some more descriptive language could be added to give the story a more picturesque effect, in my opinion this is a great start to the story. Instead of being like most other stories with one or two main character's, there is a group which give the book a more unique feel and opens the reader's up to relating to a specific character. I can tell that there are going to be some plot twists and unusual things happening in the future in this book, which makes me as a reader want to read of to find out just exactly what there will be.

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