Disparaging Future - ItsRory_12 

Reviewer: tisha650 

Cover + Title + Blurb= 4/5 [the title is a bit confusing] 

 Grammar and Spelling= 10/10 

 Detail= 10/10 

 Plot= 9/10 

 Originality= 5/5 [I love it] 

 Flow of the story= 4/5 [I was confuse at the beginning] 

 Overall Enjoyment= 5/5 

 Total: 47/50

Try changing the title to ''My future'' or something like that with simple word. 

 In the first line, I was totally confused and I didn't want to read anymore but then the more I read the more the story becomes so interesting. I would like you to change the beginning, then everything was perfect