Author: Wang_Di

Genre: Teen Fiction

Cover/Title: 10/10

I like the cover! It's unique, it's different, it's something that I haven't seen before. I love the fact that the girl in the cover has a rainbow on her face. I interpret this as her being beautiful and shining. Then when I look beside her and see stars and a galaxy it makes me think she's out of this world. Which is adorable considering the feelings of the main character.

Characterization: 10/10

"You told me that you weren't a shy woman, someone who blushed at tiny things or have butterflies on a date. In contrary, I was the one you described you weren't. Honestly, my cheeks were flushed a bit after you said that. You were straightforward, one of the qualities that outshined you."

This passage definitely 100% describes Kevin and Ella. Although it was told how Ella's personality was I still liked it, because it was Kevin's shy, timid personality and Ella's straightforward, confident one. It's kind of like ying and yang. Two totally different things that come together and make something so great.

"In the mean time, our best friends interrupted by calling us. Jonathan asked me how it was going and I said that it was okay. You stared at me when I said it, your looks displeased by those words, your smile turned into a straight line, tucking your hair behind your ear, you finally uttered a word Kevin is okay"

Come on Kevin! That was definitely the wrong choice of words. I would be exactly the same if I was Ella. I do love Ella's personality she's not quite a bitch but she doesn't take anyone's sh*t.

Creativity: 20/20

This story is nowhere near cliche!! Not at all. I 100% loved it and it's originality. I don't think I have read anything like this and the best thing about it is the fact that it's a short story! So is right to the point in no more than 10 chapters. And again I say if the reader can't put own their phone for one second then you as the author have their attention which means that you are doing something right!!

Media/graphics: 10/10

This story did not need any media at all!! Now I love reading stories and seeing pictures plus watching awesome videos to go with the storyline. However I think all of that would've taken away from the story. It is great how it is... No changes needed!!

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"It felt really magical that day as if life was paying me back for all the food things that I had done. Karma. A tear rolled down my cheek and you seemed to well up in your eyes too."

Throughout this short story I felt the need to laugh, smile, cry, and throw my phone at the wall. Not only was it so good that you feel each emotion of the characters bur the writing is done so well. The sentences are worded nicely and the dialogue is simple yet amazing. Now I did cry into my pillow for about 5 minutes but you gotta read to find out why!!! Go ahead check it out!!

Total Score: 50/50

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