NickfEast 's story started with a good hook and I admire the descriptions given .

But I think the use of advanced vocabulary and longer sentences made it harder for me to understand the text. I suggest to use simpler and well known vocabularies and smaller sentences for easy readability.  More clarification of the story would be good too.

It could be that I didn’t get the tone of the story. Anyone who loves to read astronomy, science fiction, mystery, fantasy can try out this book.