Gryffindoritnb 's book starting  is interesting and engaging. I like how you introduced the main characters, Carl and Violette, and their relationship status. The conflict created between Carl's fun night out with her friends and Violette’s unexpected call makes the reader curious.

I love how you used dialogues between Cara and her friends to show their personalities and dynamics making the scene more realistic and lively.

Go on with the book!

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