Rate: 8/10

Thoughts: Love the book so far and you have good grammar. Though for your chapter "Excuse my French" I thought you could have put more into the chapter like Sadie going around France, since it's the shortest chapter so far. I feel with your writing you could still make it better for the chapter, but it's your opinion.

Others: I read your authors note in the back and I would say give time to really think over why Sadie had this power. If you do then you can go back in earlier chapters and explain it so people won't get lost. When I first read the chapter I was so confused, but if you explain the reason, maybe at the end of the first chapter, then people would understand more better.

Payment: Read 3 chapters of my book The Seven Sinners and comment and vote if you enjoyed the book so far.

Author: Ritanitatita