Rate: 8/10

Thoughts: Hope you didn't mind all the corrections I made for you. I aim to be an editor when I grow up. I really liked the story! Love how the characters are slowly developing in the story along with the awkward love between Ryder and Naomi.

Others: I would suggest you really work on your commas because there are times were you can put commas at but you just put a period.

Author: charismatic-