Genre: Fantasy

Summary: Leisiel is a Tyrannian.

Right before everything was taken from her-- her parents, her social standing, her wealth-- everything was perfect. She was loved and been a precious child to the eyes of her people. But when her family took sail to visit her Aunt who ruled their rival kingdom- Opalia, they were ambushed and she was the only one to survive. She was twelve years old.

Leisiel is an Opalian.

After the ambush of her family's ship, Leisiel was dragged before her to Empress Tanashima-- Her cold and heartless Aunt. Soon after her parent's bodies were found, a familiar dagger was found through her father's chest. And Leisiel knew, her Uncle-- the King of Tyrannia, caused all this.

Leisiel is an Aoranian.

Since such betrayal from her most trusted Uncle, Leisiel decided to avenge the death of her parents and vowed to put Tyrannia to its knees. After seven years, she has trained herself to kill. And when she came back to Tyrannia-- all strong and fast and heartless, there unravelled a strange revelation to why her ship was ambushed seven years ago. It was because she's special. And she would do everything she can to find out what it is.

Leisiel is a Half Tyrannian and Half Opalian.

And she will bow to no one.

+ Cover

It is very, very attractive.

Rating: 9/10

+ Title

I have yet to understand the significance of title to the story so I unfortunately can't comment on it. Since it is a fantasy book the title should be in some way linked to the story.

If it isn't then unfortunately it isn't a very convincing title. I wouldn't be compelled to read the story.

Rating: 6/10

+ Summary

I loved your summary. It gives us the briefing in a very attractive way and I wanted to know more. There is nothing to change in the summary.

Rating; 9/10

+ Plot

Well, fantasy plots are always unique from each other so it is original. As far as the attraction goes, everyone has different tastes so it would depends upon person to person.

For me, on a personal level, I am not interested in these kind of stories. But that is my personal opinion and has nothing to do with your story.

Your story is unique and seems to be well thought out so it would be a great read.

Rating: 8/10

+ Characters

MC: It is still too early in the story to say much about her. She has undergone a tragic accident and yet she remains well, carefree? Not exactly carefree but from a near- teen, I would have expected a lot more emotions, especially when she is close to her parents.

Daisy: She is a sweet child though she does seem older than her age. I actually looking her better then the MC. I am not sure why but I do.

Aunt: I like her. She sounds evil but she really isn't. She is a doting mother.

None of the others are actually introduced.

+ Chapters

Lenght: It was quite long than I prefer reading but for this story it seemed to suit.

Grammar, sentence structure: I couldn't find any major errors in that so congrats on that.

General:

The only complaint I have is that she seems more emotionless than she should be for a girl whose parents were brutally murdered in front of you. She is too old to forget and too young to be strong. Instead we don't see her feel anything much for someone who loved their parents.

Other than that, the story is nearly perfect. Its pacing is fine though I will look forward to it being fastened a bit.

The interactions between the characters are sweet and nice.

I like the diversity displayed in this book. The Aunt's kingdom is the Asian side of the world and hence we get to learn a bit more about their culture. I find that very interesting.

It is still too early in the story to properly review it or see what direction it is going to take.

+ Conclusion

This story has a lot of potential and while it is still too early to know how will the story run, the grammar and writing is nearly flawless and easily understandable.

So I am sure that any fantasy lovers that prefer kingdoms, and revenge stories would love this particular book.

+ Overall Rating

8/10