Name: Luella
Author: -nessma
Type: (Fanfiction) 1 Direction
Status: Incomplete

Description: [H.S. AU // ONGOING]

In which a semi-homeless teen develops feelings for luscious chocolate curls in a rather excitement-filled story with Luella.

Review: I'm not a big fan of 1D—I like some of their songs—like my friend accio1direction is, but I know enough about them. I read the story, and I must say it's really good. The first chapter piqued my interest, which is what you always look in a story. The grammar and punctuation was great, I didn't notice many—almost no—errors. Plot seems really original, the length is extremely good too. This is something you can relate to in real-life—being orphaned and all. I like the characters too. But, the whole college thing is sorta cliche.

Rating: 4 / 5