Review #2: Only Human
Name: Only Human
Type: (Fanfiction) The Matrix
Author: KatieWeasley394
Status: Incomplete
Description: "If you want to go home so badly, why haven't you taken the blue pill yet?"
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Kate knew from the moment she was taken in the black car her life would change. But she didn't foresee exactly how it would change. How could she? How could anyone?
We're all in control of our own fate, right?
Well, what if we aren't? What if none of this is real? What if you're being controlled from birth till death, but you have no clue about any of it?
Is ignorance really bliss? Let's see how deep this rabbit hole goes.
[[The Matrix Fanfiction]]
Review: Ok, starting off, I just want to say, I've never watched The Matrix, I literally searched it up an hour ago. So I won't get the references, characters, etc. Ok? Ok.
Now, on to the review. The description of the story immediately caught my attention, which is really good. It rose my level of interest greatly.
The story itself is good! I rarely saw grammatical and punctuation errors, and the length is quite good too. I do not know how original it is, since I've never read a Matrix fanfic (of course), but I might consider continuing to reading it.
The character, seemed a bit cliche though, bit being the keyword. Try and making her a bit more, uh, unique. Add a few character trait that sets her apart from the others, (other than the not walking thing of course). Other than that there's nothing to say really.
Rating: 4 / 5
Note: Sorry this review is crap XD I'm really sleepy and it's really late. I might change it a bit, the next morning.
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