Today I will be reviewing 'Love Ways' by Rudri_pota which is a romance!

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Lets go!

○●○ C A S T ○●○

Shraddha Kapoor as Tanya

Varun Dhawan as Rohan

Tiger Shroff as Rocky

Jacqueline Fernandez as Pankti

We have a nice mix of actors here that go nicely together.

Casting for Jacqueline Fernandez is very agreeable as of now since I feel the chemistry she has with the character itself goes well.

With the rest of the actors connecting to the characters, I'm struggling and this is where we move onto the next section. 》•••

○●○ C H A R A C H T E R S ●○●

Character descriptions had been interesting but hadn't been applied in the initial story. When just seeing the character descriptions, they have potential. The right ingredients but the right method isn't being used.

With Shraddha being the main lead Tanya, her character needs to be much stronger as I imagine her to have a strong role in all the characters life. 

○●○ S T O R Y L I N E ○●○

It has a nice outline, but an overly used one too. The story is lacking an actual plot, so there isn't any sort of main goal for any of the characters.

The opening scene is too cliché. Cliché is good but at times it is overly used. It is sometimes best to start in the middle of a conversation or action, and depending on with pov it would then be justified.

Overall scenes are very bland and may disinterest you, as nothing intriguing may not be happening.

ST. TERESA is overly popular and isn't original since its been used in the movie 'Student of the Year.' This can have an affect on how readers see the school and may overlook the actors and characters that people may feel that they don't suit the setting.

○●○ W R I T I N G ○ ● ○

Too many character pov changes. This can confuse the readers and may struggle to speak up the thoughts and emotions of a character. Only character pov is necessary if it affects the storyline or only a character can connect to the reader more in that moment.

Text like wording should be avoided fully and every word needs to be written in full sentences! 'D' needs to be 'the' for example. 

Punctuation errors can be easily avoided but there's many of it too. The word choices are very simple and the same ones used often which can bore the reader as it can seem like reading the same. 

There is a lack of description on feelings and emotions of the characters but too much of action description. Not every single move it needed and only needs to be roughly told if it has no affect on the story.

○●○ S U G G E S T I O N S ○ ● ○

- For this story, it's best to keep to an authors pov as there are too many character pov changes.

- Add all the character profiles into one chapter.

- Do not use emoji's and make sure to write in full words and sentences!

- At times it can be hard to come up with new scene ideas, but don't wait for them to pop into your head. Force yourself to write and the ideas will come pouring in.

- To make your characters who they're depends on their past. A past has a huge impact on the individual towards how they're, how they think and what they believe.

○●○ AUTHORS NOTE ○●○

I hope this helped you and the advice and points I have given (purely my opinion) will help develop the book.

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Until next time...

Byeeeeee

~ Sal