Title: Euphoria

Genre: Overhaul X Reader

Author: official_kai_chisaki

Description : I don't know why but I get a yandere vibes when I read the description. 😂

Anyway— your description is okay! Not spoiling too many of the plots. 👍

Okay, I noticed that this frequently happened to you. You tend to use the wrong word to in one sentence. For example,

I ran to the drawer next to my,

The exact one is,

I ran to the drawer next to me,

Misplace of word again and grammatical error.

The door opened slowly and my mom came in.

This part should be Feeling my cheeks reddened.

- You should fix your misplacing of words mistakes and grammatical error. There aren't a lot grammatical error though so that's good. ^^

- Sometimes, I noticed you forgot some words in the story. Perhaps you didn't notice. Try to re-read your chapter before publishing it to lessen the errors in the story!

Plot : Plot is quite interesting! It is progressing smoothly. No rushing at all. Good job. 👍

Writing style : Although you aren't descriptive (I'm not descriptive too so no worries!) ,your story is still interesting. You use simple words and phrases which is a great idea!

Overall : you are alrighto! You just need to fix those misplacing of words mistakes and a little grammatical error! Don't worry, you have done your best!