Title : Aggressively Married

AU/Genre: No Quirk AU / Adult AU

Ship: KatsuDeku

Author: DlLSHAD

Title: Really sounds like Bakugou. Suit him very well. 😂

Description : OMG THE MOST AWESOME WAY TO GET MARRIED—

Wow, this is actually a nice description. Great job you did there. 👌

Imao, this is Deku we are talking about. She is the typical nerd. 😁

Little grammar mistake there. In the fifth line, the phrase "had suffering" is wrong.

After the word "had", "has", or " have" , the verb must be in past participle form.

So the correct phrase is "had suffered"

Okay, let's talk about punctuation mark. This one (.) here.

It is okay to use long sentence, but not so long it will make one paragraph.

For example, this paragraph up there.

Izuku entered the corporation to be welcomed by a very busy environment, chit chats everywhere, people making their way to their destination. The place was huge and spacious with nice amount of natural light coming through. Izuku went to the counter and the lady at the counter about her interview.

See? It will sound more accurate and seems more neat.

Alright, in this one paragraph, I like to advise you to decrease the usage of the word "and". Replace it with comma (,) . Also, you need to shorten the sentence so it won't see too messy.

Izuku took a breath in and put her hand on the doorknob, entering the room. She was instantly hit by the cold air to her face, causing her to shiver a little but she took control over it instantly.

When you are starting a new dialogue, make sure to start with capital letter.

Example:

"Yes, that's me." She mumbled and sat in front of the chair.

Expression, punctuation mark and tone of voice is important during conversation between certain characters!

For example,

"Please? Wow! Bakubro, I'm shook you said that! Come on, can't you interview this pretty lady in front of me~? Oh wait, where are my manners— I'm Eijirou Kirishima. And you are?"

Plots: Your plots and story lines are progressing smoothly. I like the plots! It is interesting to see what will happen between Deku and Katsuki.( won't spoil here)

Writing style: Your writing style is simple and easy to understand. The choice of words are simple too but it is not a bad thing. But I recommend you to try expanding your vocabulary.

If you want to expand them, then I strongly suggest you to download an app call Pocket Thesaurus! It is a great app to learn more vocabs!

Overall: Overall, well, everything is good. You just need to fix a few things and it is settled!