#Review 16
Title: High School Days (Katsuki X Fem!Izuku)
Type: Slice of Life / Romance / RomCom / Slight Mature Content
Author: StarJigsaw
Description: So... Basically, this book is a flashback during their high school days? Interesting.
What to improve:
- Alright, so I noticed you misspelled Aizawa's name. Please fix it, okay? ^^
- Your grammar is okay but still need improvement. You must know to tell the difference between present tense and past tense
- Don't make too many time skips. I never said it is baid- just lessen the time skips so that your work will look more neat and professional.
- Try not to make the characters too OOC
- Your writing style is okay. Simple and easy to understand!
- You need to do lots of writing practice.
- Try to make the chapter longer. Start with 500 as your maximum, then increase it to 600 and goes on.
Overall: There are some things you need to fix. But dont fret, I bet you will do just fine if you improve yourself! UwU
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