AN- OH MY, I LOVE THE COVER-- THEY LOOK SO CUTE!

Title: Changed 2

Type: TodoDeku, Fem!Deku AU

Author: BNHACinnamonRoll

Title: Oh my-- I feel very excited to read it now!

Description: I know this is gonna be good just from the description. (Is it wrong to read this since I haven't finished the first book yet--)

For a Person's POV, it is better to use different fonts to make it easier for the reader to recognize whose P.O.V. it is

Example:

Midoriya's POV

Midoriya's POV

Midoriya's POV

Midoriya's POV

Midoriya's POV

Midoriya's POV

Midoriya's POV

Okay, like my statement above, when you are stating place/venue, make sure to use different fonts. Use whatever font you like as long as it isn't the same fonts as this "font".

Oh my, Mineta, no--

Imao, this part is so funny I stopped reading for a while XD

What to Improve

- I already stated some above

- You have no grammatical/spelling error so far I read. I mean-- It makes sense since you are an American, right? (Am I wrong? I'm sorry-)

- Plot is very interesting! And your story is fun to read with the jokes and hillarious moments of the characters! This book is full of laughters but also keep up with the plotlines. Great work!

Overall: Everything is good. There is no problem with your story at all. Keep up with the amazing work and you will make it big one day!