Title: Wings
Author: ShinsoAizawa628

Title: I bet this is gonna be dark and emotional-- But I'm ready. Good title!

Description: Your description is good. I get excited when I read it. ^^

What to Improve

- There are too many change of POV in your book. I hope you lessen it because it is not good to change POV frequently. Readers will easily get annoyed by it.

- Try to be more descriptive. Describe the situation properly.

- There are minor grammatical and spelling mistakes. Great job. 👌

-Okay, I notice that you always use this |font| only to describe thoughts. You should use this | font | instead to write thoughts so it will be easier for the readers to read.

- Plot is decent and goes pretty smoothly. It was amazing you didn't rush it. 😄

- I don't have much to say because I think you are already a good beginner writer. Just a few mistakes you made but that can be fixed. You can improve yourself more. Keep it up!