Title: Oi, I'm Not A Villain Nor A Hero...I'm A Thief

Author: Umbreon7567

Title: You spell the word 'Thief' wrong but in the cover, it was correct. Title is important because it will give the very first impression to the readers when they see your book. It must be fixed quickly.

Description: So the one who tells the description is the OC, huh? I was confused at first but after re-reading it, I finally understood.

Your description is okay, but in my opinion, I think it is better if you put your OC's name below the text to avoid confusion. ^^

What to Improve

- I love it how you always put a quote above before the story began in every chapter. Good job!

- I found many spelling mistakes. The word claim down should be calm down. There are other mistakes but I won't list them all.

Just an advice, after finishing writing one chapter, you need to proof read the chapter in case there are many spelling mistakes/grammatical errors.

- Man-- she curses a lot like Bakugou that I legit read it with Bakugou's voice in my head. I love this OC.

- I also notice that you seem to miss some words in some sentences/paragraph. Maybe you didn't realize or forgot to type it while writing the chapter. It often happens but like I said, try to proof read the chapter before publishing it.

- The plot is awesome! You didn't escalate it too fast, which sometimes happen to some authors and that is a good work. Most readers don't like it when the plot is too rushing because it makes the story seems boring to read. People want suspense! Readers like to put pieces of the plot together.

I was intrigued by the mysterious past of your OC, Kaito.

- Your writing style is great! It is quite descriptive, I can say. Maybe, you are better than me! My writing style is simple and easy to understand.

I think you have a talent in writing. Just fix the grammatical errors and spelling mistakes and it will solve everything.

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Are you guys satisfied with my review? Am I being too strict and harsh to you?

Please tell me in the comment okay. ^^