Title: AIM (A BNHA OC STORY)
Author: BNHABIGFAN

Title: One word can describe the entire book. Aha, I have the same style of making title like this too. I like it when it is only one-word title. It puts more suspense and increases the curiosity of the readers.

Description: If I am to say, I hope you make the description longer, at least 2 or 3 more sentence. You can also make the one-sentence description but longer than this.

(Can I kidnap him--)

- Spelling mistake in the title. It should be Prologue.

- Use Capital Letter (A, B, C and many more) whenever you are starting a new sentence.

- There are some grammar error but not too frequent. Readers still can understand but still, you need to fix it. (I do spelling mistakes and grammar errors too). You need to proof read the chapter before publishing it. I know it must be a pain in the neck to proof read since we, human, can't escape laziness but at least it will lessen the mistakes and errors.

- Put space between a dialogue and the sentence before so it won't confuse the readers. Some readers are sensitive to this kind of mistake. I have met quite a lot of them who didn't like it when I didn't put space between sentence.

- You did a great job explaining to the readers about Islam! But the right word to describe "baca doa" is "recite doa". There is no verb such as "doa" in English.

- Can I be honest? Do you write this story because you are inspired by my OC story? Cuz I found many similarities in your prologue and my prologue. It's okay though, I'm not mad. Just asking. ^^

-  Don't use capital letter in the whole sentence. Readers will think you are angry or something. Change it, okay? 😁

- Your writing style is good. Simple and easy to understand.

Overall: As my conclusion, I can't really say anything about the plot since there is only one chapter but what I can say is, it has a good beginning. Keep it up!