જ Silently Loving you જ ☾Crystal☽
Author: allen_stories
Reviewer: K_worlddd
Cover: 8/10
I'd suggest you to smudge the characters in the background.
Description: 9/10
Preferably remove some details. It's giving out too many details.
Storyline: 15/15
The story is overall amazing. Preferably kindly give some intro sought of thing for the characters and make the chapter a bit smaller with more cliffhangers. You can add more twists
Grammar and punctuation: 15/20
Overall enjoyment: 10/10
I loved your content still try working and enhancing it
Blurb : 9.75/10
Characters : 15/15
The members you chose are pretty interesting
Try adding english nicknames too
at some extend it becomes confusing
Tips: Aesthetics and preface would make your story look more professional
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