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Book Name: Lafz

Author: _Aarushi__

Reviewer: rrryyy2004

Author: _Aarushi__

Title: 10/10
The title is quite good.....Most of your poems are having some emotional touch so according to it....Lafz is good.

Cover: 13/15
The cover was not attractive.......it was actually quite simple and secondly the text written on it was not clear choice of colors was not good.......I would suggest u to order a cover from a graphic shop specially regarding poetry.......

Content: 39/40 (grammar and punctuation, content creativity, plot. originality)
I really liked the theme of your poems they were amazing, almost every poem was some or the other way relatable......The emotions were perfectly expressed......

Coming to rhyming at some points I felt lack of rhyming(where it was possible) and at some placed excess of rhyming .....Otherwise everything was amazing

Writing Skills: 19/20
I can say u are an awesome writer ...... passionate and dedicated towards your work ........your way of writing is something I appropriate a lot.......the choice of words and way of expressing is very good

Over all enjoyment: 15/15
I really enjoyed reading your poems .....I would also suggest others to give this book a chance, u ll definitely fall in love with it

Total marks: 96/100

Well Done.........Keep it up.........U are a great writer

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