જ Redemption જ ☾Maya☽
Book: Redemption
Author: _WildStar_
Reviewer: prxttyslut
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Title: 8/10
The title is simple and it tells you who the fan fiction is about and also say a little bit about the story.
Cover: 7/10
The cover is simple and i like how you've added wolf ears to him and the title is well displayed in a really good font
Blurb: 7/15
The blurb has some text from within the story so you get to see a preview and at the bottom a very short description about what's going to happen, but i feel like you could have added a bit more to it
Plot and concept: 15/20
I like how it's about him redeeming himself from all the things he's done wrong and it's a really good concept for the story
Content and chapters: 13/15
There are only three chapters but that's because it's a short story and for a short story it's a good length and the chapters are a very good length as-well
Writing skills: 9/10
i really liked your writing style but you've put them all in bold which in my opinion makes it a bit harder to read .
Overall and extra comments: 59/80 you could maybe change it from all bold and make the paragraphs shorter but it's really good
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