Author: StarsAndFireflies_

Review by: Shivani_SwaSan

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First, I'll be focusing on points which, according to me, are main. ❤

✒Cover :

A nice work on the cover here. I like the way you have blended Manik and Nandini's pics in your cover. I also appreciate your choice of MaNan pics. Their pics in the cover say a lot about how their personalities in your story is going to be. So, perfect work here! Overall, it was sweet and simple, which was honestly more than enough. Keep it up dear!! (Credit to the editor)

✒ Title :

'Stars', I like it! You have the creativity of choosing a good title for your story. Even though it doesn't suit for first couple of chapters, later on, it does. So I like your title! Keep it up dearie!

✒ Storyline :

WOW!! Trust me if I had a choice to rate this story, I would have given it 5 out of 5. Amazing storyline!! A bubbly Nandini and a charmer Manik, both having their own perspective about life. You were great with showing how Nandini absorbs things around her on her first day in Mumbai.

I love how the story goes on. Be it MaNan scenes, their friends circle, you just nailed everything! I also really enjoyed the humor seeping into the story. At times, I wasn't able to control my laugh, especially during MaNan nokjhoks or should I say... 'Giant' and 'Potato'. 😉!! And amidst their nokjhoks, I'm sure no one will fail to notice how MaNan are beginning to feel something for each other. That was the highlight here.

What I love the most in your story is REALISM. All the scenes and feelings portrayed felt so real and none of them were cliché. Scenes were very smooth going and so was your storyline, I really admire you, girl!!

The way you've shown Manik and Nandini's blooming equation was lovely. I have read five chapters of this story, I would have read more but I couldn't stop myself from writing what I felt about your story. But I know as the story will progress, it's gonna be more interesting and engaging to see how MaNan will unite. I will definitely read this story, sometime in future. ❤

So... All in all it was a wonderful storyline and something fresh for MaNan fandom!

✒ Grammar :

You have a good grip on grammar. Everything was smooth and language was quite lucid. Sentences were well-constructed and so was your vocabulary. Keep it up!!

✒ Fascination :

So here comes what fascinated me the most in your story. As I said before, what I appreciate here is the realism you have carried throughout your scenes. You do have a good grip on elements like humor, affection, emotions and relations among the characters.

I personally believe that if a writer writes something putting all their heart and passion in it, nothing can stop the reader from falling for that story and getting attached to it. And you have succeeded in that, because, you have the power of hooking a reader strongly to your story. So the fascination rate is 100% here!! ❤

✒ Overall Review :

The story had a nice plot, a splendid storyline, lovely scenes, a good grammar, and all in all, I really enjoyed reading your story. All the best for your future and keep up the excellent work!! Best wishes to you!! ❤

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