Author: @sayitaloud

Reviewer: The_Sarcastic_Girl_

Chapter read: 16/30

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✒Cover:

Indeed an amazing cover. Fonts are amazing.

The whole story is in Nandini's Pov so the cover suits very nicely with the book.

✒Title:

"Secrets and lies", the title is very interesting.

The title itself give us many ideas about the story.

✒Blurb:

Quite intriguing blurb! I liked the way, you explained about deception and lies then about the plot leaving a question in our mind about the affair.

✒Plot /Storyline:

At first, I thought to read 10 chapters as I couldn't not judge the story on 5-6 chapters.

One thing, I must say, this story is quite different.  I was confused when I read the story. I had to reread the story to understand it.

The story is portrayed in female protagonist's  view. There are many things in the story. What I loved about your story is, it's quite unpredictable and not like those stories most of Manan stories.

Something quite different, Manik character shown in differently in this story which I liked.

A little bit scenes from past make us curious while present leave us a question in mind.

The presentation of story was good. But still I can't say everything without reading whole story because it will little but unfair at that part.

But overall, I liked the way you build the story around the plot.

✒Grammar :

Grammar is pretty good. The mistakes are pretty much ignorable. Very smooth reading.

But I think you can work chapter's length. Some chapters are very short and some are in good length. Rest is okay.

Payment :

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