Writer: Aeroisha380

Reviewer: NikkithaKJ

Chapters Read: 7

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Cover:

The cover of the book is beautiful and elegant. It looks attractive and somehow goes well with the plot too. Good job! 

Title:

The title is apt as the whole plot revolves around Aurora trying to maintain a facade of being rude and filled with pride while she is actually breaking under her disguise. Very well chosen! 

Description:

The description is drafted beautifully. It is precise and maintains an air of mystery. This just drew me into the book. Right amount of details to build interest! 

Plot/Theme:

The theme of the book is to depict the pain lovers undergo when they feel that their love is unrequited. You've beautifully executed the plot through the rhyming tales. Amazing! 

Flow:

The flow of the poetry is smooth as a river. There are no sudden shifts. Great job! 

Emotions:

You brought about the emotions of the protagonists flawlessly. I could easily relate to the emotions that they are undergoing. Well done! 

Writing style:

You've chosen to write a story in rhyming. That's a tedious task, but, you've done it to the mark! 

Literary devices & descriptive tools:

The metaphors used are simple and to the point. I could visualise the story you were trying to tell through the rhyming tales. Good job with that! 

Grammar & vocabulary:

There were a few noticeable grammatical errors like the fluctuating tenses. I'm sure you'll be able to rectify them through proofreading. 

So, I would suggest you to proofread the book and keep writing more such amazing works! 

Payment:

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