Writer- SamairaRajput

Reviewer- AmishaR3

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Title and Cover:

'Fate' anonymous yet known! title is working same for me. it is in keeping well yet didn't foreshow Story.  

being honest I love dark shadowy covers with intense theme but it is looking incomplete. there is something missing it according to story and moreover title and author name is of low opacity, which should be redone.

Blurb: 

I like it. its not complex yet an interest builder, the way you present their dialogues there i loved well as i am, intense deep love stories fan. It's just whatever you showed in blurb quickly unlayered in story, nothing remain for more

Plot and Storyline:

Two seprated lovers, Even after being separated, getting betrayed by other, how much love they have for each other. no ego no revenge yet a hint of madness to get her back/ to protect him. the emotions feelings were so concentrated to get lost in them.

Issues rised in story were so intense, and the way you have expressed, good job!

its just knowing little more about before sepration would be more helpfull to connect with characters.

Emotional and heart wrecking love story, someone who is in these story, go ahead read. 

Writing:

your writing is so smooth i don't get difficulty in understanding even there were no noticable gramatical mistakes. i like the way you start every chapter.

overall thumps up!

Payment:

A genuine analysis on my work and a shout out for community service.

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I hope the review is beneficial to you and i am so sorry, i have exams lined up so got delayed. Thanks for the opportunity.

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