It's not all butterflies and roses
Writer: DocileFiasco
Reviewer: NikkithaKJ
Chapters Read: 13
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This collection of poetry is one of the most emotional collections I've come across so far. The poems are so intriguing. Fine poetry!
Cover: The cover is simple but eye-catching. The rose and the leaf (I presume) that looks like a butterfly is something that has left me in awe. Plus, after reading the poems, I somehow feel the cover goes well with almost all the poems too. I would say the cover is elegant.
Title: The collection of poetry is raw and emotion. It brings out the deeper aspects and the intensity of emotions in life. So, I feel the title, "It's not all about butterflies and roses" goes well with the poems.
Blurb: To be honest, it was the blurb that caught my attention more than the cover. "Ostentatious poetry exemplified, opulent prose to epitomize." Though just a few words, they speak so much!
Grammar and Vocabulary: I am no one to or say anything about your vocabulary. You are so skilled when it comes to playing with words. Most of your poems contained words that I wasn't aware of. I had to google their meanings. I generally don't like when the flow of my thoughts are broken completely because of this but your book is different. When I read the whole poem after looking up all the words, I felt there wouldn't be other words that would've done justice to the emotions. So, I've learnt not to get disheartened when my thoughts are broken continuously due to complex words. *laughs nervously*
Also, I didn't find any noticeable grammatical errors.
Literary devices and descriptive tools: The metaphors you have used are mind-blowing. I'm amazed at how you convey the raw emotions through these metaphors. And, in most of your poems I could visualise what you are trying to convey. That's incredible!
Flow: The flow of the words and the emotions that they bring about is smooth throughout. You've done a wonderful job!
Creativity: This is the best part of your works! I mean who would even think of gold in the pots at the end of a rainbow melting into honey? You have a very wild imagination and this is an added advantage to your skill of playing with words. With these aspects combined you can make wonders happen!
Overall, I would say you are outstanding at what you do! Keep writing more such amazing works!
I would suggest you to try writing other forms of poetry. I'm sure you can make magic feel real!
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