Author: Tranquility07

Reviewer: Shivani_SwaSan

Cover :

(Don't worry, I have judged on the basis of your new cover)

A very nice cover I would say. All in all, it depicts the theme of your story. Fonts used are also good! It goes very well with the title of your story and also your plot. My only concern was the pics which were like collage-type. I guess if they were blended well, it would have left a greater impression on the reader. made it less eye-catchy. But still, it's a fine cover and I like it. Credit goes to the lovely editor! ❤

Title :

'In Shade Of Eigengrau' a great work in choosing the title for your story. It's 100% accurate and pretty eye catching. It goes very well with the plot you have planned. So for me, you have done a great work at choosing the title!

Storyline :

Well I'm speechless. This was something fresh for me to read so lots of admiration to you from my side! I love the way you have portrayed your scenes!! At some places, I felt as if these scenes were going on infront of my eyes. You have the power, keep it up dear!!

The story was full of mystery and unexpected turns. I have read five chapters of it and it's already playing with my mind. The main protagonists are keen on finding and revealing some dark secrets. It's very eye catching, and something innovative. So, an amazing story full of twists and turns. One will be eager to see how the story will be unfolded later on.

I loved the little bit of romance and humor shared by the main couple, and now little do they know that soon their lives were gonna change as they will be finding some secrets related to them. I loved how the story goes on. ❤

So all in all, a perfect story!!

Grammar :

Your grammar is quite fancy and very well constructed. You were perfect with descriptions, be it mysterious or sweet or etc, it was pretty good. You have a very good vocabulary so that's a plus point!!

The only concern here is there are some tense mistakes which you need to look after.

One such is this 'So what did you answered?'. Since you're adding 'Did' here, there is no need of changing 'answered' into that tense as well. It should rather be 'So what did you answer?'

But still, there were very negligible mistakes. Just take care of this only thing and we are good to go! Otherwise, your grammar is great! ❤

Fascination :

No doubt, you managed to hook me quickly towards the story. This was an amazing book, and it's plot hooked me very strongly towards the story. What's more, You were also great at emotions!! You portrayed the love, insecurities, fear of your main leads very well.

So the rate of fascination is 100% here!! Because this is the key point of a story (according to me). There are many readers who don't acknowledge things like plot, grammar or cover. Rather, most of the times they see how fascinated they are by the story. If they get connected to the story, nothing can stop them from reading further. And you're already successful at fascinating readers! So keep it up and keep writing, dear!

Overall :

The story has twists and turns with tinge of romance and humor. You guys can definitely give this story a shot because it's quite different and something fresh for the fandom to read!

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