Author: sapphiresnow_

Reviewer: jasmine_r22

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Trust ~ A Tale Of Love

The subtitles for every part were very eye-catching. The main aspect which I liked a lot was how the story was fully based on Swara's point of view. The way Swara kept her trust in Sanskar when she saw the ticket and waited for him to open up was appreciable.

Their confession showed the maturity they held, the understanding they hold for each other. Again the comparison made by Swara was attractive, it's not easy to fall in love so soon. Sometimes failures make a person compare and know their feelings, the difference they are feeling, why the feeling has occurred.

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Belonged

The start was really confusing, but yet again the point of view of Kavita's was the part of attraction along with the trust and love Swara and Sanskar hold on each other

Kavita's feelings were justified, but her taking a sudden mature decision was an unexpected turn. It's not easy to accept such a big reality, but she understood that she missed out things and needs to do something for her own then sticking with the past is of no use.

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Dignity ~ A Choice She Made

A good and valuable shot with a great message. A girl has all the right to choose her self respect than losing herself to a person out of fear or love. As the title suggests, dignity is important than anything else.

Anger issues are faced by all, some know to control them while some go out of control. Everything has a solution just like Sanskar's doctor, Sneha mentioned with Swara. Swara's love and boldness was the uniqueness I found in this shot. She made Sanskar realize his fault and held his hand to get him recovered than leaving in mid while Sanskar, he too was determined to get changed. True love always wins the hurdle, and so did their love.

A little more of showing the pain and struggle would have beautified the shot. It's not easy to overcome anger issues. As Swara made a choice, then showing her being strong to stand up with her choice of recovering and helping Sanskar in his difficult time would show the essence of love and trust they hold in each other.

As the whole of the short series is based on trust and love, I felt a bit of an explanation of scenes were needed here.

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The Unexpected Invited Guest

The small blurb was eye-catching and gave a hint of jealousy. Sanskar was love in the whole shot. He had jealousy, maturity, and understanding nature while Swara didn't even understand him being jealous of her friend.

Cabir and Kiara just stole the whole storyline. Kiara is way more mature than other characters. I liked her dialogue where she said 'Sanskar, I'm your best friend before anything else.'

The biggest message in the whole shot was hidden in Cabir's character sketch. Selecting a partner is a will and wish of the person be it of the same sex or the opposite. None have a right to point at them. Dialogue formation was sharp yet beautiful.

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Twisted Tryst

Title selection was best here. I was confused with the whole of the happenings. You made sure that readers gets hooked up with it till the end. For once I doubted Laksh, while it was shocking to know it was Ragini! Ragini's character surprised me a lot, misunderstanding changed her life very badly.

Kaira's character was a powerful package who was able to solve the whole mystery.

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Pacifying My Husband

Sassy Swara and confused Sanskar was a great combination. Swara surprised readers and the way she pacified and gained her husband's love was a treat to read. No negativity, moving with positivity, and gaining back Sanskar's love and trust, leaving back Ragini rather than being Mahan attracted the whole storyline.

The portrayal of emotions was really beautiful in the overall book. Dialogues were simple yet attractive. There are few typos and missing words, apart from it the grammar was apt. The subtitles went well with all the parts, but a few were very lengthy.

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