Writer- aurum_autumn

Reviewer- SN_Skylar

Chapters read- The whole book.

Areas that was asked to cover- Cover, title, Storyline and Dialogues.

Areas covered by the reviewer- All the four that was asked to.

We are aware of the fact that the chosen reviewer was truthreviewer but due to her personal work she is finding difficult to give time to wattpad and the reviews. And, as you guys have been waiting for a long time now, we are planning to divide the reviews which was under her, among ourselves (the other reviewers) .

Also, as we are planning to shut this review book and start with the new and more systematic review shop, we have to finish off with the pending requests as soon as possible. Hope you understand.

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Cover-

Works! The cover is simple yet eye-catching. It fits well with the storyline. I can't say it's perfect but okay because there's always room for improvement. The title is too large and reflects an awkward shade while being put in the middle line. I believe the bottom line would've been better and, modifying the fonts would make it look just great.

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Title-

The title is fitting. I don't know what to say more about it. I'm just... it fits well.
The story is filled with irony and humor and the title gives a brief of all in itself.

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Storyline-

I liked how the prologue was kicked off. The humor and the sarcastic wit present throughout the story made it a fun and engaging read. 

And oh, not to forget the name of the female lead character. Lol! Angel forever definitely got to be the name that I came across for the very first time. 

True, that some readers mightn't love the selfish nature of the female character but if you ask me, I loved every bit of it. Not everyone is sweet and nice, some are just sour and spicy and I respect how you turned your character into 'not an ideal one'. 

I believe the description and the formation could've been more detailed and well framed.

No doubt, the descriptions were a bit detailed but not too much as the descriptions lacked depth. It was as if you just tried to cover the above areas of detailing, missing the in-depth in the process. Even, the emotions that we should feel while reading that connect any reader with the story was lacking.   

There were too many awkward formations. For instance, there was a line- "After a long drive, we finally arrived at the address Remi told me to go to." 

The better way to frame this would be, "After a long drive, we finally arrived at the address Remi asked me to drive to."

Then the further lines would go like, "The sight leaves me in a great shock as I force my jaw to snap shut. I let reality seep in, and when it did, my face flushes a deep shade of red, and the furrows between my eyes deepen as I snap at him angrily..."

Another thing I'd like to point out is, as per the blurb you mentioned that the story focuses more on self-love and coping up with sadness, but well, down the line I hardly found something like that. I mean, yes, instances were present but not too much.

Like, only at the end of the story where the male lead breaks her heart, the strong willed woman takes up on herself to deal with her broken heart and to not get affected with all this which was nice. But that was also limited to like one chapter or so and apart from that, hardly any other incidents were mentioned where she placed herself above anything and anyone.

I believe a good and detailed analysis of that would have been good.   

So in all, the book needs good editing and then maybe a proofread would make it just fine.

But overall, the story was carried swiftly and smoothly without any big bump holes and as I said before, the story is an engaging read. 

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Dialogues-

The dialogues were witty and constructed well. I liked how the author took in on her to narrate the voices very well, but again the depth in the narrative voice was missing which made it an off read. 

I especially take a lot of care while penning down the dialogues because for me, a well-framed dialogue is something that leaves a deep impact on the reader's mind and at the same time takes the story in a very positively engaging way.

In places, the active and passive voices were mixed, which made the dialogues awkward and I guess you- the author needs to take a little more care in the tone of characters and the story.

The gestures and the tones play a major role while writing down a story and so, in a few places the expectations were met while at some, it wasn't.   

I figured that the tone of characters was kept minimal and simplistic, which was disappointing because the story of a con artist and the business man holds a lot of potential to make big in this writing and reading world, but on the bright side, somewhere you were already on it. So yeah, kudos to you for the beautiful blends. 

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