Author: @StellarClassics

Reviewer: girly_blush

Chapters read : 10

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~Cover:

The Cover is something which attracts the readers in the initial spot. But here, the cover isn't that attractive, even though it suits your story. You could've made it more innovative. Also, the fonts which you used to pen the title, aren't promising. You could've used better graphics and favourable fonts to enhance its beauty. In Wattpad, you can get many cover designers.

~Title:

The title was suitable for the storyline. Riley was a girl, who had lost all her life's colour (happiness and satisfaction) because of her boyfriend's betrayal. Now, all she needs to do was, chase the happiness and enjoyment of her life which she had lost. So the title is worthy.

~Plot:

The story revolves around a girl named, Riley Madison who was deeply in love with her boyfriend, Hazell Campbell. She was so insecure about her love relationship. She has seen Hazell with a girl named, Isabella Garcia. Isabella was a beautiful and desirable girl. And that increased her insecurities and sadness.

Riley shatters when Hazell asked for a break from their relationship. That's when she understood, he was not her's anymore. Riley wasn't able to accept it. She was in grief. That's when she met her childhood crush, Shawn Adam. He too has liked her in their childhood but never dated each other.

The plot isn't something unique or different, in fact it's pretty common type story in Wattpad. I personally think, you could make the plot a little different from usual one. Because sometimes people gets bored with same type plot, otherwise it's okay.

~Storyline & Creativity:

While reading the first three chapters, it was like a common cliche story, where a girl was insecure and jealous of her boy friend's female friend. But then, it turned out to be, the boy actually trying to cheat the girlfriend in the name of friendship. It was heartbreaking.

The storyline was common. But what made it unique, was the way you weaved the words out. You made me go through the trauma, Riley was suffering. You made me feel the distress, she was going through. And in between, you made everyone hate, Hazell for his inconsistent and unreliable attitude.

The book was written in the first person's narrative manner. So I was able to understand the sentiments and feelings very well. You managed to portray a girl's securities and dilemmas in a love relationship fabulously. Every character in the story was depicted amazingly well. Your story and its characters were flawless. The story was a mixture of distress and grieve. Anyone reading the story would become emotional. It touched my heart. Every writer needs to touch the heart of the reader. Here, you made every chapter, beautiful and sympathetic simultaneously.

~Grammar:

You did a great job on it. It was appreciative. I wasn't able to find any grammatical errors. Sentence formation was good. There were some punctuation errors. You can do editing, that would help.

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