Note:- You may find everyone's pov different from each other. But that's what it is. You can't really expect your all fingers to be the same.

So, it's a kind request to respect everyone. And mainly because, many of them are experiencing judging for the first time.

And please, don't forget to leave your comments!

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Books:-

Forbidden Crush by thatabayagirl

Kaiba's Prostitute @karirakitan

Silence ur_favouritexx

Stars StarsAndFireflies_

Readers:-

sumedhian_sumu

sonali112

truthreviewer

RuVineet

RRRodriguez84

sleepy_head

@sumedhian_sumu

Forbidden Crush

1) Flow:- 1.3/2

2) Relatable:- 0.85/2

3) Plot:- 1.8/2

4) Grammar:- 0.43/2

5) Hooked up:- 1.2/2

TOTAL:- 5.58/10

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Kaiba's prostitute:-

1)Flow:- 0.22 /2

2) Relatable:- 0.56 /2

3) Plot:- 1.6/2

4) Grammar:-1.8 /2

5) Hooked up:- 0.75/2

TOTAL:- 4.93/10

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Silence:-

1) Flow:- 1.9/2

2) Relatable:- 1.2/2

3) Plot:- 2/2

4) Grammar:- 1.7/2

5) Hooked up:- 2/2

TOTAL:- 8.8/10

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Stars:-

1) Flow:- 0.34/2

2) Relatable:- 1.5/2

3) Plot:- 0.89/2

4) Grammar:- 1.3/2

5) Hooked up:- 0.68/2

TOTAL:- 4.71

sonali112

Forbidden Crush

Flow- 2/2

Relatable- 2/2

Plot- 1.8/2

Grammar- 1.9/2

Hook up- 2/2

Total- 9.7/10

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Kaiba's Prostitute

Flow- 1.8/2

Relatable- 1.8/2

Plot- 2/2

Grammar- 2/2

Hook up- 1.8/2

Total- 9.4/10

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Silence

Flow- 1.8/2

Relatable- 2/2

Plot- 2/2

Grammar- 1.7/2

Hook up- 1.8/2

Total- 9.3/10

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Stars

Plot- 1.8/2

Flow- 2/2

Grammar- 1.7/2

Hook up- 2/2

Relatable- 2/2

Total- 9.5/10

RuVineet

1. Silence by @ur_favouritexx

Flow -2/2

Relatable -2/2

Plot - 2/2

Grammar -2/2

Hooked up- 2/2

Total-10/10

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Forbidden Crush by @thatabaygirl

Flow -2/2

Relatable -2/2

Plot - 1/2

Grammar -1/2

Hooked up - 2/2

Total - 8/10

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Manan FF - Stars by @Starsandfireflies

Flow - 2/2

Relatable - 2/2

Plot - 1/2

Grammar - 1/2

Hooked up - 2/2

Total - 8/10

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Kaiba's Prostitute by @KariRakitan

Flow - 2/2

Relatable - 2/2

Plot- 1.5/2

Grammar - 1.5/2

Hooked up - 2/2

Total - 9/10

RRRodriguez84

Kaiba's Prostitute Score

Flow: 2/2

Relatable: 1/2
I only say this as I never been married and dated someone or dated someone that was married. I have, in younger years, had would we say somewhat dynamic relationships just never to the extent in this book.

Plot: 2/2

I have never read a book like this before. In my opinion the plot is unique.

Grammar: 2/2 I did not find any grammar errors.

Hooked up: 2/2

I was interested the whole time even though I was at times shocked by the complex relationships and openness about said relationships.
Total: 9/10

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Silence Score

Flow: 1.5/2

I admit I was confused on the progression to the second chapter otherwise I think the flow was fairly set.

Relatable: 2/2
I can relate to awaking from a surreal dream

Plot: 2/2

Grammar: 2/2

Hooked up: 2/2

Total: 9.5/10

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Forbidden Crush Score

Flow: 2/2

Story has a wonderful flow.

Relatable: 2/2

I can relate to having a crush on someone that either you are not supposed to. In fact, one of my first college crushes was a Muslim co-worker

Plot: 1.5/2

I don't think that forbidden love is a new idea, but the story plot is a new one for me.

Grammar: 2/2

I found no grammar issues.

Hooked up: 2/2

I was excited to know what would happen next after ever sentence.

Total: 9.5/10

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Stars Score

Flow: 2/2

I love the flow and how the chapters are broken into short and spaced out paragraphs making it easy to read.

Relatable: 2/2

I can totally relate to the humor and teasing of friends presented in the book.

Plot: 2/2

I don't recall reading/hearing of another book with a similar theme.

Grammar: 1.5/2

I noticed a few grammar mistakes, such as misused or misspelled words. As for the Indian dialect used, I am not sure of any grammar issues.

Hooked up: 2/2

The story kept my attention with both the humor and smooth transition between scenes.

Total: 9.5/10

truthreviewer

1. Silence by @ur_favouritexx

A. Grammar-- 2/2

B. Flow-- 1.87/2

C. Plot-- 1.87/2

D. Relatable-- 1.9/2

E. Hooked Up-- 2/2

Total-- 9.64/10

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2. Stars by @starsandfireflies_

A. Grammar-- 1.73/2

B. Flow-- 2/2

C. Plot-- 1.9/2

D. Relatable-- 2/2

E. Hooked Up-- 2/2

Total-- 9.63/10

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3. Forbidden Crush by @thatabaygirl

A. Grammar-- 1.85/2

B. Flow-- 1.9/2

C. Plot-- 1.87/10

D. Relatable-- 2/2

E. Hooked Up-- 2/2

Total-- 9.62/10

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4. Kaiba's Prostitute by @kariRakitan

A. Grammar-- 1.9/2

B. Flow-- 1.92/2

C. Plot-- 1.8/2

D. Relatable-- 2/2

E. Hooked Up-- 2/2

Total-- 9.62/10

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On a true note, all of these four were splendid. It was one of the toughest job for me to mark scores. If not my strict checking which was basically forced upon me, these all books would've scored on 10 with just slight differentiation of marks.

Also, thank you BSC for giving me a chance to judge these competitive books.

Forbidden crush by @thatabaygirl

Flow -1.5/2 According to first 2 chapters, the flow is consistent but there is bit dragging in some parts.

Relatable - 1.4/2 I can relate to the story. I like the way you potrayed naiza's character. Usually, in such stories people tend to over dramatize the characters which even though makes it interesting but can't happen in real life. You made naiza relatable. It was simple and sweet. But I couldn't understand the main lead. Why does he hates talking with every girl? It doesn't make sense and gives negative impression of the character.

Plot -1/2 Its a simple and sweet story without much drama. However, I think you can make the story more descriptive. Describing the main character's thoughts, insecurities in more detail will make it more interesting. Giving an insight in the boy 's life can also help us to know why he behaves the way he does.

Grammar-1.4/2 The story needs editing. There are no problems with punctuations and you have done a good job in dividing the content into paragraphs as it makes it easier to read without getting confused. However, there are some minor grammatical mistakes which needs to be corrected like you mentioned that somewhere "small little gang" which doesn't make sense. It also helps that you mentioned that english is not your first language.

Hooked up - 1.2/2 Its a light read and refreshes your mind.

Total- 6.5/10

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Kaiba's prostitute

Flow-1.5/2 The flow is smooth but for me some times it gets confusing as I have never heard of kaiba

Relatable-1.7/2 Its not something I have read before. Its completely unique which makes it more interesting. It also helps that you mentioned about who kaiba is so new readers like me can know what's going on. However, I have to do some research on kaiba as on first read I couldn't understand what's going on.

Plot- 2/2 The story is very interesting and I also liked the way you started the chapter with quotes and explained why you used it. Prostitution is a sensitive topic and many people have misconceptions about it. You did a commendable job in throwing light on facts without making it boring.

Grammar - 2/2 There are no grammatical mistakes. You also described everything in detail and expressed each character's emotions beautifully.

Hooked up - 1.7/2 Its an interesting read and I was eager to read next chapters

Total- 8.9/10

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Silence

Flow- 1.5/2

Relatable- 2/2

Plot- 1.7/2

Grammar- 1.7/2

Hooked up- 1.8/2

Total- 8.7/10

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Stars

Flow- 2/2

Relatable- 1.8/2

Plot- 1.8/2

Grammar- 1.5/2

Hooked up- 1.8/2

Total- 8.9/10

I personally thank each one of the reader who voluntary helped us bringing the hidden talents to glory. Thank you so much, once again❤

We can't really thank you all enough but will try our best to make the best of among you all to deserve a prize at the end.

~Sky