✰[Voting Round|| GROUP:- 3]✰
Note:- You may find everyone's pov different from each other. But that's what it is. You can't really expect your all fingers to be the same.
So, it's a kind request to respect everyone. And mainly because, many of them are experiencing judging for the first time.
And please, don't forget to leave your comments!
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BOOKS:-
1. After I fall by CourtneyPeterman0
2. 14 days by pettysmut
3. 6 years later nothing left but Regret by naturedreamer04
4. Calming the Storm Elegiac_Damsel
5. Crimson Trails Shreya_VA
6. 7 Days, 7 reasons _fillesilencieuse_
JUDGES:-
2. user78498773
4. uwuzain
5. litlove17
6. Anonymous
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Judge:- 1
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1. After I fall
Flow: 2/2
The story progresses in a smooth way. The continuity is amazing.
Relatable: 1.5/2
Pretty relatable. The descriptions make it easy for me to relate.
Plot: 1.5/2
Though the plot is not too unique, the way it has been brought out is unique.
Grammar: 1.7/2
There a very few noticeable grammatical errors. However, it would be even more delighting to read a few short sentences here and there instead of the frequent long ones.
Hooked up: 1.5/2
The writing style is quite interesting and leaves me wanting to read more.
Total: 8.2/10
Overall, the story is a blend of a plot not so unique but portrayed in a beautifully unique writing style.
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2. 14 days
Flow:1.5/2
The prologue to the story gives a basic idea about the story. The story is brought about in a easy, relatable way.
Relatable:1.5/2
The writing style makes the story relatable. Amazing!
Plot: 2/2
Quite a unique plot written in detail. Loved it.
Grammar:1.8/2
Wonderful use of language.
Hooked up:1.7/2
Kept me involved and left me with a desire to continue to read.
Total:8/10
Beautiful beginning. Would love to read the rest of the chapters.
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3. 6 years later - Nothing left but regret
Flow: 0.5/2
The characters in the story have been introduced abruptly that interrupts the flow of the story. The timeline could have been planned properly and penned down accordingly to establish a proper sequence.
Relatable:0.5/2
The story would've been more relatable if the characters were explored in detail in the set context. There were many characters in the initial chapters whose names came up out of no proper context.
Plot:1/2
Basic idea of the plot was not so unique but it was clear however, the same hasn't been penned down in a clear manner.
Grammar:0.5/2
I came across a lot of grammatical errors and spelling mistakes in the first two chapters. Lot of scope of improvement in this area and it is evident that the writer intends to use appropriate language. Hope to read chapters with good grammar in the future.
Hooked up:0.5/2
The unexplored characters could give a lot of opportunity for the reader to get involved with the story when there is a subtle suspense with appropriate level of introduction.
Total: 3/10
Lot of scope for improvement in the chosen plot.
Better character sketch and a proper timeline could be implemented to create wonders out of the story. Would love to read more stories from the writer when she's on her way creating wonderful stories.
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4. Calming the storm
Flow: 1.5/2
A simple, easy to read and relatable story-line with a smooth flow.
Relatable: 1.5/2
The style of narration makes the story relatable. However, it is advisable to choose POVs wisely.
Plot:1/2
I wouldn't say that it is a unique plot. It's a common plot with beautiful writing.
Grammar:1/2
Grammar is one of the areas that calls for improvement. The way the sentences are structured could be better.
Hooked up:1.5/2
The plot does make me want to continue reading until end.
Total: 6.5/10
Kind of a cliche plot but it has been made interesting with good narrations. Would love to see the writer work on the areas for improvement.
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5. Crimson Trails
Flow: 2/2
Smooth!
Relatable:1.5/2
A little more detailed description would do even better wonders!
Plot:2/2
Unique and interesting. The idea of writing chapters based on colors is truly fantastic.
Grammar:2/2
No complains!
Hooked up:2/2
Totally intriguing!
Total:9.5/10
My idea of a perfectly designed and brilliantly penned down story. Love you!
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6. 7 days, 7 reasons
Flow:2/2
The prologue to the story has set a path for the story to progress. The chapters are amazing continuation to the prologue.
Relatable:1.5/2
The story is quite relatable and simple.
Plot:1.5/2
It's a blend of common plots to create a unique one. Good idea!
Grammar:1.3/2
A few grammatical errors and spelling mistakes here and there. Would be wonderful if the writer corrects them.
Hooked up:1.7/2
I, as a reader, feel the story is quite interesting. The slight element of suspense adds to the curiosity.
Total: 8/10
A uniquely common story-line with humble intent and beautiful portrayal of emotions.
Thank you for giving me an opportunity to read and share my opinion about these wonderful books.
Judge:- 2
After I fall — @CourtneyPeterman0
Flow: 1.8/2
The flow is smooth and normal. The detailing is accurate. The chapters are engaging.
Relatable: 1.5/2
I can understand the emotions the female and male protagonist are going through. The events are much realistic which makes this story relatable.
Plot: 1.8/2
The plot is unique and interesting. The emotions of a pregnant woman who is heartbroken because of her boyfriend who is frustrated by their relationship in the first chapter is accurately detailed and well written. The fight scene was entertaining. The drama element of the plot is well portrayed. I am sucker for quotations so that is a plus. The story is also presented beautifully.
Grammar: 1.5/2
Underuse of punctuations. No visible grammatical errors in framing of the sentences. Well defined words are used. The extra space after the full stop makes me uncomfortable.
Hooked up: 1.7/2
The story is very interesting and entertaining. Here, both the characters are correct about their feelings towards the situation which makes the reader intrigued to read ahead.
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6 years later ~ nothing left other than regret — @naturedreamer04
Flow: 1.5/2
The pace of chapter is pretty much normal. The chapters are very short.
Relatable: 1/2
The emotions the characters are feeling are very much accurate and one can relate if the situation is similar.
Plot: 1/2
The plot is to show the emotion of regret of the characters due a misunderstanding which is very nicely written. But the repetitive plot in each chapter makes it a little boring. The character's feelings is very well described. The event of the plot should be more descriptive so that someone that is not from the fandom can understand like me.
Grammar: 1/2
There is grammatical errors in framing of the sentences. Lack of well defined words and punctuations. There are some typos.
Hooked up: 1/2
The way the emotions are portrayed hooked me up with the chapters. The repetitive scenes are a bit frustrating to read though.
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Calming the storm — @Elegiac_Damsel
Flow: 1.5/2
The flow of the first chapter was a bit slow and stretched but the flow of the second chapter was normal and smooth.
Relatable: 1/2
The scenes are quite relatable but lack uniqueness.
Plot: 1/2
The plot of arrange marriage is very common. The character's emotions and the events should be more descriptive. I like that the author is trying to involve social message in the chapters which is very much appreciated. The way of presenting the plot needs improvement.
Grammar: 0.8/2
There are typos. The exclamation mark is overused. Some paragraphs are too long. There are minor grammatical errors in framing the sentences. Incorrect punctuations.
Hooked up: 0.8/2
The story is very common and plain. The chapter is stretched and predictable.
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Crimson Trails — @Shreya_VA
Flow: 1.5/2
The pace of the story is a bit slow. According to me, the intriguing and eerie elements of the story really needed that pace. The chapters are short.
Relatable: 1.2/2
I can relate to the character's actions if the same ever happened to me. The way the protagonist kept trying to ignore the thought of someone( she ); so that he can focus in the present is relatable and realistic.
Plot: 1.4/2
The plot is very interesting and unique. The suspense element is the best part of this. The creativity of the storyline is excellent but portrayal of the same need improvement. I love when a writer uses quotations which makes the story more presentable and beautiful. The character's feelings are described accurately so the readers can connect. Some parts are confusing.
Grammar: 0.9/2
There are some typos. There are grammatical mistakes in the framing of the sentences. Incorrect use of punctuations. The paragraphs are very short. Other than that the usage of well defined and what should I say maybe some fancy words( lol) makes the story more presentable.
Hooked up: 1.3/2
The story is interesting and I love fantasy so that was a plus. The grammatical errors was difficult to neglect. I was confused at some parts but maybe that would be cleared as the story moves on.
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7 days, 7 reasons — @_fillesilenciuse_
Flow: 1/2
The flow of the story is a bit fast forward, the scenes are not very detailed. People usually don't like over details of the scenes so maybe that's okay. But personally minute details matters to me because it's help to understand character's pov/feelings more accurately.
Relatable: 0.5/2
This is a personal choice I suppose. Obviously if someone special/ close to me cheat on me, my heart would break but I am an optimistic person and the thought of suicide scare me; so that part is totally not relatable to me. The way of releasing anger by breaking things is the most/only relatable thing in this story for me.
Plot: 0.9/2
The plot is pretty much common. I have read stories like this. I like the concept but the way of presenting the plot needs to improve. There were certain parts which really unsettled me so I am pointing it out. Firstly, if someone is being cheated on, it is hard to trust people easily and here the male protagonist is a stranger to the female protagonist; which makes that part a little unrealistic and strange. Secondly, the reason one being family is a good thought but here the situation was not accurate as she wasn't in contact with her family for three years.
Grammar: 0.6/2
There are typos and underuse of punctuation marks. There are minor grammatical errors in framing sentences. There are no mention of which character's pov it is or pov change. The character roles are not mentioned, this could be neglected but as I am not from the fandom I was confused. The metaphors used didn't really go with the situations.
Hooked up: 0.8/2
- The plot is common. I couldn't connect/relate to the character's emotions due to very less detailing of the scenes/feelings. The creativity level in the story lacks which really disappoints me.
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14 Days @prettysmut
Flow: 2/2
The flow is smooth, the chapter is the perfect length for a short story.
Relatable: 1.9/2
The detailed emotions and scenes makes the feelings of the characters very much relatable.
Plot: 1.8/2
I have read stories of this particular plot but this story is unique in its own way. The "blue" mystery is such an intriguing part. The way the characters are portrayed is commendable. I love the character of Chance sm, like he is surely going in my list of favourite fictional characters.
Grammar: 1.7/2
There were punctuation mistakes. Some grammatical errors in framing of the sentences. The author did a good job in using well-defined words which makes the story more presentable. (I literally learned two new meanings, thanks lol) ;)
Hooked up: 1.8/2
I have only read bxb stories which are fanfics so that is that. I read 5 chapters in one go, when I was only required to read two chapters but that is the point of this criterion I suppose. :)
Judge:- user78498773
1. After I fall by CourtneyPetermanO
Flow - 2
Relatable - 1. 1/2
Plot - 2
Grammar - 2
Hooked up - 1.1/2
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2. 14 Days by prettysmut
Flow - 2
Relatable - 2
Plot -2
Grammar - 2
Hooked up - 1
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3. 6 years later- nothing left but regret by naturedreamer04
Flow -1.1/2
Relatable - 1.1/2
Plot -1/2
Grammar -2/2
Hooked up -1/2
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4. Claiming the storm by Elegiac_Damsel
Flow -2
Relatable -2
Plot -1.1/2
Grammar -2
Hooked up -2
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5. Crimson Trails by Shreya_VA
Flow -1.1/2
Relatable -1
Plot -2
Grammar -2
Hooked up -1
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6. 7 Days, 7 Reasons by _fillesilenceieuse_
Flow -1.1/2
Relatable -1.1/2
Plot -1.1/2
Grammar -2
Hooked up -1.1/2
Judge:- Angelic_fiercee
AFTER I FALL-
Flow - 2/2
Relatable - 2/2
Plot - 2/2
Grammer - 1.5/2
Hooked up - 1.5/2
It is not everyday we read something that have a touch of army background. I really liked the story and the characters. Grammer was also good. Amazing book.
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14 DAYS-
Flow - 2/2
Relatable - 2/2
Plot - 1.5/2
Grammer - 1.5/2
Hooked up - 1.5/2
It was something new for me. Your grammar was really good and the way you portrayed the emotions were very nice. Amazing book.
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6 YEARS LATER ~ NOTHING LEFT BUT REGRET -
Flow - 1.5/2
Relatable - 2/2
Plot - 1/2
Grammer - 1.5/2
Hooked up - 1.5/2
You tried to express the emotions of all characters, how they felt after realizing their mistakes, which was good. Although I feel like you could have written a bit more which could make the readers feel their emotions too. Other than that I really like the idea.
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CALMING THE STORM-
Flow - 1.5/2
Relatable - 1.5/2
Plot - 2/2
Grammer - 0.5/2
Hooked up - 1.5/2
Their were many grammatical errors. Their are places where you have used ellipsis (...) which were wrong. And their were typing errors too. Other than that the story was really good and the plot was good too. It's not everyday we see a journalist and a lawyer fall in love ;).
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CRIMSON TRAILS-
Flow - 2/2
Relatable - 2/2
Plot - 2/2
Grammer - 1.5/2
Hooked up - 2/2
This book was really something. I am not a fantasy reader. But this book was really intriguing that kept me hooked up. The grammer used was also very good. Amazing book.
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7 DAYS, 7 REASONS-
Flow - 2/2
Relatable - 2/2
Plot - 2/2
Grammer - 1/2
Hooked up - 1.5/2
I really liked the character of Aditya. The way how positivity won over all negativity. The plot and story was really good. Interesting book.
Judge:-
anonymous
1. After I fall
Flow- 2/2
Relatable- 2/2
Plot- 1.8/2
Grammar- 2/2
Hooked Up- 1.8/2
Total- 9.6/10
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2. 6 yrs later nothing left but regret
Flow- 1.5/2
Relatable- 1.5/2
Plot- 1/2
Grammar- 1/2
Hooked Up- 1.3/2
Total- 6.3/10
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3. 14 Days
Flow- 1.7/2
Relatable- 2/2
Plot- 1.8/2
Grammar- 2/2
Hooked Up- 1.5/2
Total- 9/10
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4. 7 days, 7 reasons
Flow- 1.5/2
Relatable- 1/2
Plot- 1.5/2
Grammar- 1.3/2
Hooked Up- 1.5/2
Total- 5.45/10
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5. Calming the storm
Flow- 1.5/2
Relatable- 1.5/2
Plot- 1.2/2
Grammar- 1/2
Hooked Up- 1.5/2
Total- 6.7/10
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6. Crimson Trails
Flow- 1.7/2
Relatable- 1.5/2
Plot- 2/2
Grammar-1.2/2
Hooked Up- 1.5/2
Total- 7.2/10
Judge:-
1. After I fall by Courtney
A. Grammar-- 1.8/2
B. Flow-- 2/2
C. Plot-- 1.8/2
D. Relatable-- 1.8/2
E. Hooked up-- 2/2
Total-- 9.4/10
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2. 6 years later by Nature Dreamer
A. Grammar--1.2/2
B. Flow-- 1.5/2
C. Plot-- 1.3/2
D. Relatable-- 1.25/2
E. Hooked up-- 0.7/2
Total-- 5.95/10
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3. Calming the storm by Damsel
A. Grammar-- 1/2
B. Flow-- 1/2
C. Plot-- 1/2
D. Relatable-- 1/2
E. Hooked up-- 1/2
Total-- 5/10
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4. 14 Days by prettysmut
A. Grammar-- 1.7/2
B. Flow-- 1.7/2
C. Plot-- 1.7/2
D. Relatable-- 2/2
E. Hooked up-- 2/2
Total-- 9.1/10
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5. 7 Days, 7 Reasons by fillesilence
A. Grammar-- 1.4/2
B. Flow-- 1.2/2
C. Plot-- 1.5/2
D. Relatable-- 1.5/2
E. Hooked up-- 1.25/2
Total-- 6.85/10
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6. Crimson Trails by Shreya
A. Grammar-- 1.5/2
B. Flow-- 1.5/2
C. Plot-- 1.5/2
D. Relatable-- 1.5/2
E. Hooked up-- 1.5/2
Total-- 7.5/10
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Thank you once again❤
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