Note:- You may find everyone's pov different from each other. But that's what it is. You can't really expect your all fingers to be the same.

So, it's a kind request to respect everyone. And mainly because, many of them are experiencing judging for the first time.

And please, don't forget to leave your comments!

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Books:-

1. SwaSan SS: Fighting for Him by Sparkly_penned

2. Whirlwind by teenager_scribbles

3. Ek Adhuri Dastaan by Sparkly_penned

4. Another chance by Mamree

5. My Husband is mine polymath_land

6. If it's not forever, it's not love by _fillesilencieuse_

Judges:-

1. Madhyamgram

2. AmishaR3

3. Ramitajaipur

4. priya_265

5. @colddragonoriginals

6. haripriyaax_

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JUDGE :- 1

Madhyamgram

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1. Swasan ss: Fighting for him by @sparkly_penned

= 7/10

2. Ek Adhuri Dastaan by @sparkly_penned

= 9.3/10

Whirlwind by @teenager_scribbles

= 6/10

4. My Husband is mine by @polymath_land

= 5 5/10

Another chance by @Mamree = 8.5/10

6. If it's not forever, it's not love by @_fillesilencieuse_ = 4/10

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JUDGE :- 2

AmishaR3

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1: SwaSan SS: Fighting for Him by @Sparkly_penned

FLOW: 1.7/2

According to first two chapters, flow is adequate. Neither there was rushing in scences nor turtle speed to bore, so for me story is going in an enjoyable flow.

Relatable: 1.9/2

Story is relatable for me. How a father is nurturing his son alone, how he wants to save him from going anywhere near his past as well as his pain and love for his wife and then about girl who is grieving for her child, her mental stability. Their emotions and feelings are written in a manner that I can do relate.

Plot: 1.7/2

According to first two chapters, I liked story line, how story is going on is interesting but not unique. it is not going with synopsis, according that it is a charming guy and a sweet girl story, they fall in love at first sight, then married, had a son then separated for whatever reasons. isn't it old torn plot we read from decades?
Chapters does have their freshness, their past mystry is making it full of curiosity.
i really love the way prologue part is written, where a father doing every thing to save his son. emotions were conveyed beautifully, scenes were expressing in real as heart touching way but a little more work on synopsis will be blossom the plot.

Grammar: 1.6/2

Story is not written with weak grammar but there are many grammatical mistakes. the dialogues were written and scenes were described with a selection of catchy words but, there were mistakes too.
like: He waiting for Lucifer to entered (enter) in the ring, so he can attacked (attack) him.

Words as freshen up was written as freshness up. There were many more, can't write all but you have to correct. Do more focus on your past tense.
as: 'Rohan and I play cricket' is wrong. it should be Rohan and I played cricket, as he was stating already done activities.

Hooked up: 1.9/2

Well it worked for me to hook up with this story, curiosity of what will happen next is without doubt created. Specifically mysteries of past and secrets, well do attracts readers for more. A little advice, don't stretch it to a extent, where it can loose its form.
And Yes, I will read it futher for sure.

Total: 8.8/10

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2: Whirlwind by @teenager_Scribbes

FLOW: 1.6/2

In first two chapters story just took steps and then suddenly it start runing, it started with slow steps as male lead's world then female lead's miseries, their meeting but then you rush it so fast in their feelings but i liked the way you introduce character one buy one, creating mysteries about them.

Relatable: 1.5/2

Story lacks little bit of clarity like in prologue, it is written girl has never seen her father then she is used to be her father's princess but now he beats her. her father being distanced after her mother's demise, we can relate but to beat his own daughter i don't think it seems real.
About boy's parents is written that they were divorced then his mother was busy in inebriated, and then i accept you have portrayed boy as rock star, millionaire or whatever but transferring 12 crores twice in some weeks is indigestible. make clear draft of story and real so we can relate with characters.

PLOT: 1.7/2

i liked the way plot is arranged, in strong, cogent theme, emerged with a dark side of life. how for A Rockstar who has everything infront of world name fame wealth has different side too which is troumised, broken, not so perfect still coping with life
and girl who is at every moment trying to protect herself as well as demonstrating herself as a strong women. All in all plot is worthy but in writing form, scenes dialogue are so common and obvious, somehow it is Remitting real vibes of story.
you can't be lost in thoughts of someone or you will not just do things, you left eleven years ago, the wall in which you have secured your self can't be broken in minutes right? these things take time and development so don't rush in these it is destroying plot.

Grammar: 1.6/2

Make it look more presentable. Writting style and dialogues are plain. Make your sentences more peachy, it will pull readers intreset.
When monologues are written, it should be in italics and Direct speech is not as: Prithvi, "I am going."
Prithivi said/told/declared "...." it is right form of direct speech. Punctuation marks are missing at many places so correct that.

Hooked up: 1.7/2

This depend on choice of readers, this story doesn't make me crave to read but yet can be readable.

Total: 8.1/10
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3: Another Chance by @Mamree

FLOW: 1.7/2

Reading wise flow is smooth. story is going in good pace as you are describing characters, their emotions i like it but paragraphs are been dragged which are distributing.
you are putting many things in one scene, separate them.

Relatable: 1.8/2
I can, how a person is repenting from years for what he did. how our one wrong move can demolish not us but our every relation.
these emotions are written so beautifully, specifically with reality so readers are able to catch.

Plot: 1.9/2

Plot is strong Intense Love story with brainteaser past, we have read many stories on sepration due to misunderstandings track but a few on repentance. this is written so well about dark side of world, where bad company can destroy your life, where a boy has been drugged and molested just because of jealousy and human trafficking,
characters are so well developed and important.

Grammar: 1.7/2
there are not grammar mistakes, quality of words is good but paragraphs are written so lengthy, which are running presentation.
like in first part arnav and his father's conversation, there dialogues are written so together and confusing at some time "dialogue..." (said by....) this is proper way.
"......" "....." this way is odd as well confusing.

Hooked up: 1.8/2

offcourse i would read further.

Total: 8.9/10

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4: My Husband is Mine by @polymath_land

FLOW: 1.7/2

it is okay but i can be better, as there is little dragging in every scene and confusing too.

Relatable: 1.5/ 2

I am sure this is relatable for many where wife is taken granted and enscure about her relations but the way it is written is not. Even when i am a Arshi fan, i became confused specially in starting, from where story is starting or it's back story.
suddenly arnav start realising his surroundings, coming early at home, going behind khushi as there was not exact reason or clearly shown feeling so we can relate and even characters are under developed.

PLOT: 1.7/2

'My Husband is Mine' expectations from tiltle itself were bold, sassy wife who will fight for her right but it is not written in that way, it can be more developed and interesting. you tried creating suspence about khushi's adoption but for me is not working and i don't think even going well with plot too.

Grammar: 1.6/2

Needs editing. there are mistakes of grammar, punctuation and capitalization.
Dialogues in hindhi were so wrong, as a reader its annoying too like khushi not kushi.

Hooked up: 0.8/2
it depends upon preferences too but personally nothing made me interested in story so no. i would not like to read futher.

Total: 7.3/10

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5: If it's Not Forever, it's Not Love by @_fillesilencieuse_

Flow: 1.8/2
I really liked the way it moved forward.
According to story line as it is short story, flow is perfect but just in last few parts you can write more.

Relatable: 1.9/2
Avni's feeling are natural teeanger's, her insecurities, fear of not acceptance and more and then neil again a natural character carefree straight forward guy, which many of us or around us it's so easy to relate them.

Plot: 1.9/2
Teenage love! first impression we put on this topic is infatuation, this plot is about that. I really liked the plot where two teenagers are coping with their feelings that too in so mature way. insecurities, future and family how in all those they are searching for their forever, how even after year's sepration their love didn't disappear.
This kind of story line is something, I would love to read more on.

Grammar: 1.9/2
Thumbs up for your grammar but it's just i don't understand why are the dialogues in italics where the story is in simple direct speech? I don't know, i am right or not but yeah it's disturbing for eyes.

Hooked up: 1.8/2
writing is attractive for me specially dialogues so yah, i would like to read more.

Total: 9.3/10

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6: Ek Adhuri Dastaan by @Sparkly_penned

Flow: 2/2
For me writing and flow is just proficient.

Relatable: 2/2
I loved the way story is portrayed. there are not many parts written, still the way it is described those ghostly feelings, sensations as well as curiousness you have built is full of merit. little suggestion, according to theme try to write more intense like in prologue when sanskar wake up due to nightmare, he just looked at clock and went to freshen up! I don't think after some horrific dream, you can be instantly normal.

PLOT: 2/2
A guy, who is observing odd things which are not normal. Horror love story with thriller as it is, this kind of plot comes with it's own uniqueness.
I loved the way guy character is portrayed as simple, common guys who has its own bundle of curiosities where as, swara mysterious character.

Grammar: 1.9/2
Grammatically it is good but editing will not be harmful. Your writing is so skilled specially terms you used. just don't write dialogues in italics.

Hooked up: 2/2
Story is officially stuck in my mind and roaming. It is a complete package for readers like me.

Total: 9.9/10

JUDGE :- 3

Ramitajaipur

Swasan SS: Fighting for him by Sparkly_penned

1. Flow : 1.5

It flows smooth and doesnt confuse me at all coz it is not very thrilling

2. Relatable : 1.5/2

again dear it sort of oscillates between relatable and dramatic for me

3. Plot : 1/2

Its not unique. I am sorry if it came out harsh but same old concept of swara being rich sanskar a street fighter they get separated, one of them has their symbol of love and both are broken but the handling of the concept is fresh

4. Gammar : 2/2

No typos at all.

5. Hooked up : 1.5/2

I sort of was hooked up more due to the father son bond of sanskar and samar and the way of writing and presenting

Total: 7/10

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Ek Adhuri Dastaan

1. Flow 2/2

simply perfect

2.Relatable : 1.5/2

3.Plot :1.5/2

4.Grammar :2/2

5. Hooked up :2/2

Total: 9/10

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Whirlwind

1.Flow: 2/2

smooth

2.Relatable :1/2

not really relatable

3.Plot: 0.5/1

have read something similar many times

4.Grammar : 1.5/2

some punctuation and capitalization errors

5.Hooked up :

can I give a zero , not at all intriguing for me so and sorry for the harshness

Total: 5/10

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Another chance

1.Flow: 2/2

it was hell amazing

2.Relatable : 1.5/2

3.Plot : 1.5/2

have read only few stories like this and this fun

4.Grammar : 1.5/2 kuch Hindi ki galtiyan thi rest it was perfect

5.Hooked up : 2/2

definitely yes

Total: 8.5/10

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My Husband is Mine

1. Flow : 2/2

it was so thrilling and painful at the same time

2.Relatable : 1.5/2

bit dramatic but it was necessary given the theme

3.Plot : 2/2

really fresh to read and fantabulous writing

4.Grammar : 2/2

superb grammar

5.Hooked up : 2/2

definitely awesome

Total: 9.5/10

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If it's not forver, it's not love

1.Flow : 1.5

ok -ok flow it was

2.Relatable : 1.5

3.Plot : 0.5

nothing new

4.Grammar :2

perfect

5.Hooked up : 0.5

not at all

So here it is done from my side, hope it was help dear and I was more than happy, glad and honored to do it

JUDGE:- 4

priya_265

[Special thanks to Priya for reviewing 12 books in total]

1. SwaSan SS: Fighting for him

Flow- 1.5/2

Relatable- 2/2

Plot- 1.5/2

Grammar- 1.3/2

Hooked Up- 2/2

Total- 8.3/10

It's Dhamaal. Totally a hook up story which would make you complete the story at once and only then one can move the eyes off the story, because it is highly intimidating and something new to read.

Good try! Just work in grammar part and the flow of the story which I felt was going too slow.

Overall, it was great!

2. Ek Adhuri Dastaan

Flow- 2/2

Relatable- 2/2

Plot- 1.7/2

Grammar- 1.5/2

Hooked Up- 2/2

Total- 9.2/10

Basically, mystery/thriller are my 2nd love and your book definitely did fall in this category. Great attempt and please don't forget someone is eagerly waiting for the upcoming chaps.

Well try! A bit more emotions would be great to make readers feel the chills more because somewhere I felt that it was lacking.

Whirlwind

Flow- 1/2

Relatable- 1/2

Plot- 1/2

Grammar- 0.5/2

Hooked Up- 1.2/2

Total- 4.7/10

Good story but needs to struggle quite hard to make your story best.

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Another Chance

Flow- 1.5/2

Relatable- 1.5/2

Plot- 1.2/2

Grammar- 1.5/2

Hooked Up- 2/2

Total- 7.7/10

Going great! You are just rocking with suspense and thrill. Though, I haven't read the whole story but would love to complete it any time sooner. Brushing up a grammar part and revising grammatical rules would be nice.

Overall, a healthy attempt.

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If it's not forver, it's not love.

Flow- 2/2

Relatable- 1.75/2

Plot- 1.5/2

Grammar- 1.5/2

Hooked Up- 1.7/2

Total- 8.45/10

A good blend of emotions. And your grip on descriptions is hard dude. Simply, great one!

JUDGE:- 5

@Colddragonoriginals

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Fighting for Him by @sparkly_penned

Flow-

1.3/2.

Relatability-

1.2/2

The concept is good. Not unique though.
It's a good story for a fiction, but it's not that relatable in real life.

Plot-

1.2/2

It's not a fresh plot but neither an over useful plot.
It makes an interesting read.

Grammar-

0.5/2

You tend to mess up the tenses a lot.
In one sentence you start off with "He is" and then suddenly in the next sentence you jump to "He was."
Also the title of your first chapter.

"Is she beautiful?" Should actually be "Isn't she beautiful"?

Hooked up

1.4/2

Total: 5.6/10

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Adhuri dastaan by @sparkly_penned.

Flow.

1.3/2
Nice flow for a supposed thriller.

Relatable.

1.2/2

Again in a fiction land , it's relatable.
But in real life , I highly doubt people dream about a random person and even if they do then it's highly unlikely they think about them.

Plot.

1.3/2
A thriller plot. It's a good try. There aren't many dark/thriller fanfics out there. So kudos to you for trying a different genre.

Grammar.

0.7/2

As I mentioned earlier. You have a lot of trouble in keeping up with the flow of tenses and also you have lots of grammatical errors which makes the reader lose interest.
I will suggest that you proof read your books yourself or at least ask someone else to do so.

Hooked up.

1/2

It's a good attempt for a thriller and especially for someone who has tried it for the first time. But it failed to gather my interest. Maybe further into the book I would have been hooked but till chapter 2, I didn't find myself wanting to read ahead.

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Whirlwind by @teenage_scribbles.

Flow

1.45/2

Started off with describing the characters.
It was a decent start and had the right pace.

Relatable

1.3/2

It is written in a way that it will definitely strike a chord with the audience.

Plot.

1.2/2

Not a unique plot.
Two broken hearts , finding solace in one another. It's a cliche plot line. But also a plot line which does wonders (because every ITV fan is a sucker for this ) if executed properly. And it seemed to be executed properly till at least chapter 2.

Grammar
1.1/2

I personally dont like addition of hindi dialogues in a english story. If it's a hinglish story , do mention it in the story desc.
Also I would recommend that you proof read . There are quiet a few grammatical errors
One line that I would like to correct , it should be "Ishq , mohabbat , sirf zuban se nikle lafz the. " and not "Lafz ke zuban ." That doesn't make sense.

Hooked
1.35/10

A cliche track done right. It made me want to read ahead.

Total: 6.4/10

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My husband is mine

Flow

1.2/2

Relatable

1.1/2

Plot

1.2/2

Grammar
1.3/2

Hooked
1/2

Total: 5.8/10

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Another Chance

Flow-
1.2/2

Relatable-

1.5/2

Plot-

0.75/2

Grammar-

1.35/2

Hooked-

1/2

Total: 5.8/10

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If it's not forever it's not love

Flow-

1.4/2

Relatable -

1.2/2

Plot-

1.2/2

Grammar-

1.15/2

Hooked-

1.2/2

Total: 6.15/10

JUDGE:- 6

haripriyaax_

Hello! It was a great experience to work under this community and I had a wonderful time judging all the books you've sent. I'm glad to say that few writers have come up with really exciting stuffs. My heartfelt thanks for giving me this opportunity.

and I've added my own reviews as well in the list. Pardon if it's not in order, it's kind of shuffled. :)

SwaSan SS: FIGHTING FOR HIM

[By~@sparkly_penned]

Plot : this is something really unique I've read till now totally eliminating the cliché stuff, that is, it would rather be the female protagonist in the place of male (which is portrayed in the story) who would be undergoing all the sufferings. It revolves around a couple and their little one. Due to some unfortunate conditions/situations the father with their son and the mother will drift apart. 2/2

Flow : the flow of the story is pretty accurate neither too forward nor running in a slow pace. I somehow seemed to figure out the plot from the gist of two chapters I've read. 2/2

Grammar : the grammar is pretty much admirable only if the writer avoids writting few dialogues in hindi. 1½/2

Relatable : absolutely yes, though I haven't read futhurmore I could actually feel the emotions the writer managed to bring out. I feel this is gonna be one heck of a emotional ride involving -angst and love.

2/2

Hooked up : it was to some extent but I could pretty much contemplate that something was really missing and I really find it difficult to decipher the reason. 1½/2

additional reviews: the book cover looks well executed, adding the necessary details like- the male lead with his son, the emotion-angst of the couple where it gives the somber atmosphere of the story. Overall it came out really well. Thought I didn't read the rest of the chapters but I feel the title would go hand in hand with the story.

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EK ADHURI DASTAAN- lost within lingering memories.

[By~sparkly_ penned]

Plot : few people rarely choose mystery- thriller and might have failed to create the suspense but here I really appreciate the writer for choosing this genre and also for making it very much intriguing. The writer has managed to create the mysterious atmosphere in the prologue which would attract any person to this story like a bee attracts to honey( provided the mystery should be contained well) . If the rest of chapters are continued depending upon the plot it'll totally do justice to the genre that the writer has opted. 2/2

Hooked up : since I always welcome mystery and thriller with open hands I was pretty much hooked to this piece of work but that doesn't mean I'm being biased for other genre though.

i'd be really glad to read further. 2/2

Flow : flow of the story is good not too fast forward neither in slow pace. It was like every other normal story. The writer has paid attention to every little details and described it well. 2/2

Grammar: Only few grammatical errors here and there which can be avoided. If the writer invests correcting the error it will be really appreciable..That was the only drawback spotted and im glad to see they've used only few hindi lines in the conversation.. 1½/2

Relatable : yes, I really acknowledge the genre they've chosen. People rarely choose such types..hope the writer will do absolue justice to the story.. 2/2

additional reviews: and yes about the cover- absolutely relatable to the plot.. very delighted to see that the writer has paid attention to minute details in cover. It actually provides the insight of the book. The font of the cover could have been better! Though the title is common I like the English extension the writer added to the book..

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MY HUSBAND IS MINE.

[BY~ polymath_land]

additional reviews: I insist that the writer must specifically work out in the book cover. It's something that'll always catch people's attention when they stumble upon their book. I feel the cover must provide the impression of the book they pen down. And I'd really appreciate if the writer provides the title of each chapter for it actually provides the insight of the chapter they've updated! The title is rightly chosen for the plot.

Flow : I couldn't first contemplate the concept of the story but then after re-reading the plot I feel few parts are left to reader's observation- like I found it difficult to decipher the pace of the story at the beginning..i hope the writer doesn't extend the scenes for two chapters.

1½/2

Plot- it's pretty same concept and I feel the it's revolving around a simple plot where it can be actually resolved within few chapters and the writer could provide other fillers in the story. 1/2

Relatable: yes it was, though it's a common-usual plot I could find the writer bringing out the emotions and transitions in the story. ..2/2

Grammar: for an amateur writer I suggest they should really work out in grammatical errors and try avoiding usage of hindi filters cuz our medium is always preferred as english. 1/2

Hooked up: if the writer pays real attention to the plot then I'm sure the readers will definitely develop the hype and attachment to the story. 1½/2

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ANOTHER CHANCE.

[BY~@Mamree]

Flow : the flow is good, not too much unnecessary fillers are added in between neither the chapter was prolonged. It has a smooth pace. 2/2

Plot: it's a cliche plot and I've have actually read couple of times. It's something like -due to unfortunate situations the couple who were in love had to drift apart. I'm glad that the writer managed to create the suspense behind the reason of their separation.. 1/2

Hooked up: it is written pretty good and the emotions the lead undergoes has been portrayed so well by writer. It has managed to hook me up for reading further. 2/2

Grammar: absolutely good. Should avoid unnecessary punctuation marks else the writing has really come out well. 1½/2

Relatable: although it's a usual plot & genre, the scenarios were pretty much common, I had no qualms in accepting that I absolutely relate to the scenes and characters very well.. 2/2

additional reviews: I really hope the writer comes up with better cover though I really liked choice of caps used in the cover. Might be better if they add few textures and overlays, the font should be highlighted and changed.

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WHIRLWIND

[By~ @teenager_scribbles]

Additional reviews: The title is absolutely incomparable and I really appreciate the writer for coming up with such unique title.. it's very much catchy! I myself feel intrigued to step ahead and read the story. Whirlwind is (as per my knowledge) a column of air that spins fast in circular motion that represents a tornado. I'm really curious to see what do they relate whirlwind to!

Special applause for font selection, though the background is missing I find the colouring absolute beautss!! Kudos to the editor!!

Plot: I haven't read something as gloomy as this where both the leads are undergoing their share of sufferings! Both have miserable past and broken family dealing with their own inner demons! I've always read where -It'll either be one among the two being the knight in shining armour for the other. If the writer keeps up with plot it'll really come out well. 2/2

Hooked: very much curious to know further as to how the writer represents someone/event/issue as whirlwind in the book! Yes, it did hook me up. 2/2

Grammar: grammer was good and decent. really loved to see the dialogues highlighted!2/2

Flow: I feel the writer could've have introduced the leads opening in the first chapter, they shouldn't afford to prolong such scenes. and yes the writing is smooth. 1½/2

Relatable: Concept, yes it is relatable. People think twice before chosing such plot to write owing to the reviews, but it's really appreciable seeing writers exploring different styles! 2/2

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IF IT'S NOT FOREVER ITS NOT LOVE

[By~@_fillesilencieuse_]

Flow: the writing is very smooth and has a great flow- like including minor details actually looked appealing while reading. 2/2

Plot: another unique and yet wonderful plot the writer has geared up! I was skeptical that if it would be another day to day love story but the writer haa proved me wrong. it was something frivolous I suppose, it doesn't involve much roller-coaster ride of emotions!

2/2

Grammer: nice vocabulary but the writer should correct few grammatical errors here and there! The presentation and dialogues highlighted should be applauded. 1½/2

Ralatable: sweet and soothing love story! Absolutely relating to the emotions the leads experience with their first attraction. 2/2

Hooked up: I really have a thing for such charming love stories and I've no second thoughts in accepting that yes, it did hook me up well. 2/2

Additional reviews: The cover is pretty. The font selection is good and the texture, overlay used match so well with it. The silhouette of the leads and the caps are kind of confusing to decipher. If that is really worked out better then the cover will be really amazing.

I personally thank each one of the reader who voluntary helped us bringing the hidden talents to glory. Thank you so much, once again❤

We can't really thank you all enough but will try our best to make the best of among you all to deserve a prize at the end.