Note: The Review contains spoilers.

Well, for an amateur writing, the book had its perks and its downfalls all the same.

As a fellow writer, i know it is very hard to write a story with all its characters and plots and twisting roads and above that, and completing it is definitely on another level. On the basis of only this, the writer should get all the praise worth for it.

Now on the more technical levels if we say, the first emphasis of i want to put on is on the plot. The gist of the story and the overall plotline is very common which is to be about the arrange marriage between our two protagonists, Tiffany and Zylen, which we all know was in trend many years ago on wattpad. But it had its quirks too, as we can see the author has tried to differentiate the plot from other common plotlines. For instance, our protagonists doesn't have any kind of relationship in the 10 months of the marriage, save for the next 2 months that they'll have some type of connection between them which is unusual in these type of plots because mostly they start having some kind of moments after their supposedly contractual marriage. Secondly, the girl gives the divorce papers which is also unusual in these type of plots along with the fact that they actually do get divorced without being girl getting pregnant after their divorce, which is also another natural occurrence in these types of plots but this also shows the true feelings between male and female protagonists without having any kind of external pressure.

On the other hand though, the story had some plot holes, as it was obvious the story was not proofread or have been edited in the first place and was a rough first draft which speaks volumes for a review.

Now the second emphasis i want to put on is on the arc of the characters through out the whole story. If we look closely, any of the characters didn't actually have any arc other than i guess Zylen which after half of the books decides to love nd pursue Tiffany which was sudden. The other point added in above statement is that the characters didn't have much conversations, moments, time together to actually make them fall in love with eachother which was just all of a sudden. No funny, hilarious moments has been shared between both protagonists to ensure the growth of their relationship.

Thirdly, the story was rushed. There was not enough explanations or we can say details about the characters, situations and their environment, if we speak casually, to set the mood and feel of the scene. If the details are added, the story and their characters will get a deeper understanding and connections to the readers which was amiss in the story.

Though the author did try to make it a bit more dramatic by Tiffany's sudden disappearance and her accident which resulted in her being in a coma for two months. And of course, Zylen's obvious love was shown during these months and after that when he was taking care of her.

All in all, the all over story can be improved with all due editing, proofreading, by filling the plotholes and by adding a bit details and feels in the story but excluding the clichés would be the best course for further improvement as the clichés are very common and make the story less diverse. In the end, hearty congratulations to the author for their vision and determination for completing this story while doing a great job writing it BUT with the required improvements it will make it better. 

Well i had written the review for quite sometime but didn't post it. I hope everyone is well amid this whole pandemic and coronavirus even if its been an year. The world has changed and i think even if we realise or not, it has changed for the better. I didn't mean to be harsh but i still think everything happens for a reason but still i want to remain positive. Well for further remaining positive here's something lol.

On that note, I hope to see y'all at the next review. Anyeong ❤️