The Love Unbound is a unique story of two characters from two contrasting realms. Asteria and Erebus need to cross paths to uplift a tragical curse on the Lord of the Dark Universe. Living in the Word of Hopes, Asteria becomes the unknown target and the reason for the tragical curse placed on Lord Erebus. Does she know? No. Does he think she did it on purpose? Yes. A spark of romance lingers in the air and could this story could truly be a "tale of unanticipated love blooming on the flames of rage?" Dive in to find out!

The cover page of any story is very important as it visualizes your story. This cover page is quite simple but meaningful. It shows a man's hand grippling a woman's hand softly. It shows a soft possessiveness from one to another- Erebus over Asteria. The dark background exquisitely highlights the main element of the cover page, the flawless hands.

I like the choice of the font type of the topic but it would be better if the font size was a tad bit larger or bolder for it to appear more clearer to the readers.

The title is a wonderful representation of the story written by aura_wryts. The state of the love story between Erebus and Asteria is faintly showed to the readers through this title. Although they were both bound by ill-fate, their love unbinds eventually (hopefully!)

I think this is a brilliant selection as the choice of topic and the chosen cover page goes on par which makes a good first impression.

The summary is alright but it could be better. It is too lengthy, revealing a lot about the Erebus's backgrounds. It could be simplified as the summary needs to attract the readers and learn about him whilst reading the story. I like the introduction of Asteria - simple but striking.

The last paragraph of the summary is my favourite. It has the perfect amount of suspense which leads the readers to dive into the book. Overall, 6/10 for the summary.

The first chapter gives a clear introduction to The Dark Knight- Erebus and the personalities of his family members. It brings out the princely relationships he has with the people in his kingdom and towards his father. The narration is excellent- all his interactions and his inner monologue truly brings out the royalty within him.

This chapter brings out the type of relationship he has with his sister. Through the eyes of Erebus, he states she she is stubborn and "if she sets her mind on something, she is not going to leave it easily." Erebus on the other hand, is a tough soul/ "ruthless" but loves and listens to his mother dearly. Overall, this chapter thoroughly brings out about Erebus and his family. 8/10

Since the story is in POV, it's a good decision to describe one character in one chapter and the other character in another until the readers have a good idea of who is who.

The plot is truly unique. It merges the two words of fantasy and reality. Erebus is a Lord of Darkness. His point of view is surrounded by royalty and speaks majestically (like literally!) Asteria on the other hand is described like a doctor on Earth (the World of Hopes.) The way she thinks and talks to describing simple incidents, everything is described as how normal people speak.

All credit goes to the amazing writer who is able to bring out the different personalities just by the style of narration. 10/10. I'm really impressed by your talent.

I love love love how the first two chapters are dedicated to the background of the characters and how it introduces to the type of person they are. A proper backstory of a character is absolutely necessary and I believe aura_wryts has given a brilliant backstory for both of her main characters Erebus and Asteria.

Through both chapters, they clearly signifies what each character prioritize. Erebus prioritizes his success to "elevate this kingdom to unmatched greatness." On the other hand, Asteria prioritizes her grandfather who loves her dearly.

For now, much of character development cannot be seen as only few chapters are released but I am hoping that these characters will develop in the future.

The story pace of any book is a tricky thing to master as it could keep readers or send them off. The story pace of this story is beyond brilliant. Each emotion, each step, each action is interpreted well. The chapters are of perfect length; they are satisfying to read. 9/10. Well done!

First, I would once again love to comment on the lovely writing style. It is chef's kiss. Wonderful bits of personification are used throughout the story - "words hit me." The vocabulary of words is vast and the flow of these words are amazing. I love the little riddles; they give out a beautiful touch of satisfactory to the readers as they flow just like calm waters.

Your piece of art is proof that you work hard to perfect your book. The important pictures to every little detail, this book brings out everything so neatly, thanks to you dear author. I applaud.

I'm really sorry if I offended you in anyway, but I reviewed and critiqued with the best intentions. I hope these tips will be valuable and I hope this review would do justice to your book. I am loving the concept! It is really unique! You are a talented author and I am eagerly looking forward for new chapters. I wish you a great day ahead! 

Your dearest reviewer,

psyco_berry12.