Just to help a little:

Minahil is (Mini)

Maria is (MM)

Hania is (Gulabo).

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"ehhhhhh why what oh MY God! Why didn't you tell me? I'm so humphhh happy " I said while hugging my best friend and nearly crying. I have been given a surprise visit by none other but my best friends well not all obviously but Minahil and Maria came. Who knew they would be here on my doorsteps especially in such critical times.

"oh we just wanted to surprise you, and it wasn't confirmed till last minute so didn't want you to have false hope" mini said embracing me in a hug.

"I can't imagine..... ehhhhh you are really here," I said with a voice full of joy.

"ok honey stop with your dramatics and let us in already, can't you see how tired we might be because of the long saffar(journey) we had, to get here" mini said while MM dramatically sighed and fell a little on me to elaborate it, I dragged her in, laughing.

"who is it di (sister)?" Hania asked and I accidentally let go MM which was carried by a loud thud on the floor.

"awww you are such a bitch," MM said her language flowering as always I see.

"Maria no swearing in my home bro and I'm sorry," I said while picking her up.

"Maria baji and ohhh Zubaida appa too good to have you here guys" uh well my sister started calling mini Zubaida appa because once, a few years ago we by mistake dropped oil on our carpet and she suggested us how to get rid of it and it actually did work so yeah Zubaida appa it is for her.

"when will you forget that nickname?" mini asked while greeting her while Maria was trying not to laugh but failed badly.

"come on meet mom and dad, they would be wondering who came?" I said and walked towards our dining room while my sister chitchatted with my friends she really gets along with them.

"mama baba look who came." I said while mini and Maria said their salam to my parents.

"Assalamo'aliakum auntie, uncle." they both said and sheepishly met my mom while she gave them side hugs.

"how was your saffar bachon (journey kids)" my dad inspected calmly.

"Oh, uncle it went great and thank you for letting us stay at your place," Maria said and I was looking between my besties and dad wait he knew...

"you knew ohh you really knew..........why?" I asked my dad in my high pitched voice. He smiled and sipped his chai.

"well I thought they should pay you a visit before you get admitted to mental asylum" he answered sarcastically and my friends laughed haha how funny it is being embarressed at front of your friends.

"ok ok if that's it imma go upstairs now so they can get fresh, mama ask Asghar chacha to make tea for us with some snacks, " I said and left for my room upstairs.

"your house is beautiful more prettier then the previous one, MashaAllah," mini said looking around.

"this has to be your idea right," Maria asked pointing at the picture on the staircase. Well no it was my dads and mine. We always wanted to put family pictures but never got a chance or the perfect place but well this was the best place and we went for it.

"um well, it was my dads actually" I replied while reaching for my doorknob and opened it.

"Welcome to my room," I said while entering but they stood there looking at my room. I waited for them to say something. My room was quite a mess at the moment actually but not that and I still love it.

"what is this a designing center or a painting one?" Maria asked breaking the discomforting silence and I just relaxed because it wasn't that bad.

"ah come on idiot it's gorgeous, why are you so artistic Behan?" mini asked while going through my latest design sketches that were laid on the table.

"I see! I am actually amazed to see that in all this mess, you did remember to put a bed, do you even sleep Edward cullin?" Maria asked while giggling on the last part ugh I hate their references but ah the movie wasn't that bad.

Well for my room she was right actually it was um too full to be true, every wall has its own purpose, the wall you face when entering the room is covered in a gigantic canvas painting of a butterfly that I made last year inspired by Taylor Swift and the wall behind my bed was covered in small canvas paintings and quotes and pictures of friends and family with twinkling lights. The wall joining the room to my dresser was covered in graffiti that I tried and its fine I guess, the one with the main door is the one with a bookshelf with all my favorite books and movies and around it I have hanged some of the CDs of my favorite albums and then the one with window is the one with a big table that's covered with my latest design sketches and cutouts of fabric and beside it are two dummies for displaying my design and putting more illustrations in my dresses and getting a visual of the whole look. And in the corner, there is a stand with canvas with a painting of sunset still not finished. I get that its too much and I see now where my dads coming from, I did take a lot of pressure and to distract myself I starting working more like a maniac.

"I'm just working on some new designes," I said to mini coming out of my thoughts. While MM laid on bed.

"these are gorgeous and the dress you made for me it was so pretty," she said and suddenly Maria shouted my name.

"what happened MM are you fine," I said immediately while turning to my best friend. Who was actually a perfect depiction of a horrified child I tell you?

"it's here the results oh my GOD I cant what if I didn't get in I can't open them oh my GOD," she said totally tensed, mini and I rushed to her to try and calm her down. Haye, I wish she got in. Ya Allah madad (God help us).

"come on MM you can't think that way, be brave and face it like a strong woman and whatever happens just remember; Allah jo kerta ha achay ky liya kerta ha (whatever God does, does for a good reason). Come on now open it, its fine InshaAllah everything will be fine" I said trying to comfort her and it did work she took a deep breath while mini fetched water from my side table.

"what is it batao Bhi mara(tell me bro) " mini said while handing her the glass of water. But she just didn't move, oh God what happened.

"Maria sis what happened please tell us," I said but she was just lost so I just took the phone from her hands and she grabbed me in a hug.

"I got in I got in ria." She said while crying and all I could do was thank God and smile. Such an emotional moment it was haye.

"I'm so happy for you, I'm so happy" and mini came to hugged us too, I am so happy for her because we all have been working too hard to get our goals straight and thank God we are succeeding in them.

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Author:

Not a strong chapter but I'm trying to buildup the story because trust me I'm clueless of where its gonna go but let's hope it turns out to be good. let me know what you think.