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Plot Holes
Have you noticed any of these?
• Illogical Events
• Contradictions
• Dropped Plot Lines or Characters
• Unexplained Changes in Character or Setting

Inessentials
Have you noticed any of these?
• Unnecessary Scenes
• Clichés
• Repetition
• Redundancies

Pacing
How does the story make you feel, in terms of its pace? Is it moving too fast or slow?

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