opinions please

So I was planning on starting an actual story on WattPad.

So far I have one side character completely planned out and ready.

Imma show my side character, ask your opinion, and later debate on how I continue my characters and story.

If it's a bad opinion like: " You're a horrible author and idea sketcher! Th his is awful and I never want to hear your ideas ever again. Th his is trash!"
Please don't comment it....

Ok I'm a big baby but like.... That's a little offensive...

Of course if it's a tip I'll gladly listen and try to apply it!
(Example: The character/plot is nice but I think I it be better to have this/random thing\ instead of /idea of mine\. With adding that you fix plot hole.)

Ok yeah I'm so weird....

ANYWAY!!
here goes my character:

'Sammy' Carter-Samuel James Carter

Age-19.

Height-6"2

Weight- 179 LBS

Gender-Male

Hair color- Dirty Ginger

Eye color- Green With Blue Flecks

Personality(s)- Shy, caring, and kinda sweet while being slightly guarded with and around new people. Usually sarcastic, funny, and guarded around friends. While being alone he is usually sad, scared, and lonely.

Orientation- Undetermined

Main Clothes- Short sleeve leather tunic, jacket, denim jeans, and basic sneakers.

Detailed Main Clothes- Tunic has some oil splotches/stains, jeans have some patches in parts as well as some frayed parts, jacket has been obviously re-stitched at the seams and is well worn along with a stitched name in yellow thread and some decorated patches with names.

Physical Markings- Robotic left arm and left leg, he is missing a left eye, and has parts of of his head held together with metal plates. There are large and visible claw like scars stretching across the left half of his body, probably from a large animal. (Because I'm not sure if I want it to be from a person, a bear, or some magical creature.)

Attributes- Can shift forms into any living animal/aquatic being.

Basic Info- was attacked by (whatever I decide caused the scars) when he was 11. This has caused a minor form of trauma (almost like PTSD). He is very self conscious and depressed with his scars.

Occupation- Engineer

Plot orientation- Sammy will be a main side character that I plan on (hehe you can see!) somewhere near the story's climax.

First noticed/comes into story- (Main Character{s}) needs to something built. This 'something' is big and tasking to build so they search for a good engineer and stumbled across Samuel. Over the time Samuel, Sammy, works in (something) the main character(s) bond with him and accept Sammy for who he is. Samuel stays with them for the rest of his character time.

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Ok so I want your feedback on Samuel, Sammy, and his plot points.

Try not to be super mean because I really want to start a story.

By that I mean please don't be all like 'you shouldn't write ever again because you're an awful writer and person's and just give me ideas and tips on this.

If I choose not to write I won't it to be on my own accord and not because some person doesn't like my ideas.

See ya' later!

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