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Life is so unfare sometimes n destiny is so cruel the people we love the most in snatch them or put them in trouble ......

City Hospital:

Everyone are sitting infront of ICU and praying Manik eyes turns blood red n just looking at Nandini his love suddenly he goes from their n Cabir follows to make sure he doesn't hurt himself

Manik goes out of the hospital before Cabir can stop him he drives away rashly

Cabir follows him .........
Manik was driving n thinking about his n Nandini moments he rubs away tears harshly soon he reached mandir which he once visited with Nandini

Flashback

3months back it was Sunday so Nandini decided to take Manik somewhere

Manik : Nandini hum kaha jaa rahe hai

Nandini: Manik shhh n drive

Manik; tumhara kuch nahi hosakta

Soon they reached mandir

Manik : what we are doing here

Nandini: huh Manik we are infront temple so definitely to pray

Manik: oh really I thought we are here for party

Nandini : Manikkkk

Manik: Nandini I'm not coming u go

Nandini: no no ur Congo

Manik : Nandu yaar I don't believe him

Nandini: but I believe n god na humesha achai logo Kai sath acha ho karega
After lot of pleading Manik enters n both pray

End of flashback

Manik slowly goes inside n prays

Manik : my Nandini believe u always so right for the people who are good n I know I do lot of mistakes but please meri Nandini ko Save kardo I cant leave without her after my mom dad she n my dadu are only left agar usko kuch hua toh I will lose myself please god please bachao usko
Manik was literally crying n pleading seeing him like that Cabir to cries n soon pandit comes towards Manik n pats him

Pandit ji : beta apki pyaar ko kuch nahi hoga Bhagwan ji sabh ka bala karega

Manik : sachi

Pandit ji : Sach mein aap bas himat rako

Meanwhile in hospital

Nandini starts take heavy breaths nurse who is observing goes immediately goes n calls doctor

Cabir pats Manik shoulder
Cabir: Manik

Manik turns n see Cabir standing he immediately hugs him n cry

Cabir : Manik shath ho Jao Nandini ko kuch nahi hoga
Manik: hmmm

City hospital

Seeing nurse running dadu n sharada maa gets worried soon doctor n nurse rushes to icu ........

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