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TITLE: 10/10! It's really cute and I like that it has something to do with the plot.
COVER: 8/10! It's cute! It's a little simple and the border looks a little odd (to me, at least) but overall it's nice and it matches all your other covers which is always a plus.
FACE CLAIM(S): 7/10! Malina, Isabella, and Sadie are pretty overused by this point but they're all cuties so it's okay. Also love that you're not using that mole rat as Eddie. An intellectual!
SUMMARY: 9/10! It explains the plot well and it made me excited to read more.
STORYLINE: 10/10! I've actually never seen OCs who are related to Betty so it's interesting to read. Betty and Charlie's relationship sounds like it was really cute (btw reading the Pennywise encounter physically hurt me so THANKS for that.) Richie and Charlie's dynamic sounds???so???cute???and I'm for sure going to be adding your story to my library.
OVERALL: 44/50!

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