CHAMELEON
Zoeperv

TITLE: 7/10! It's clever and unique, but I don't really see how it relates to the story. I mean, I know you explained it in an author's note, but you shouldn't have to describe it, it should click and make sense over time!
COVER: 6/10! It's pretty bland and black and white covers don't typically catch my attention so yeah! I'm sure there are plenty of graphic shops willing to make a nice cover for you!
FACE CLAIMS: 9/10! I haven't seen Lola used that much, but with the IT cast already being primarily white, it can be pretty boring to just see a bunch more white people added to the mix!
SUMMARY: 8/10! It's descriptive, but you don't put spaces after your punctuation which irks me because that is so grammatically incorrect!
STORYLINE: 4/10! I don't like how you put pictures and stuff in the middle of your story because as the author, it's your job to describe that instead of just finding a random picture to use! Not to mention it's very jarring and takes me out of the story which isn't something you want to do. Also, again with the not spacing after the punctuation and it's in first person which isn't really incorrect to use, but third person is typically more sophisticated and easier to read. Also, the chapters are very short which makes it harder for me to get a good idea of the story. 
OVERALL: 34/50!

( rate by nicole! )