Pixzane manga page


Remember, what I said recently? Well... the idea of a Ninjago-Manga wouldn't leave my mind, so I tried one scene from "Rebooted".
It got far, far better, than I expected it to be, still I have tons of criticism...

You'll get it step by step:

Practicing faces...


And finally...





























I have to admit, I am incredibly proud of it!

Doesn't mean everything is perfect.
The panels are to small, which means, that either the text does not fit into the speach bubbles or the speachbubbles don't fit into the picture (and I forgott the "Extern" in P.I.X.A.L.'s name *cryyyyy*)
Besides, I have totally no idea, how to fill panels properly (I should buy a book about it, I suppose...).
And I'm not entirely happy with the faces. P.I.X.A.L looks like she was freakin fourteen years old and Zane isn't much better. The only face that worked was Chibi-Cole's in the upper left corner and even he is to far below...
Still, P.I.X.A.L is incredibly elegant, the first time she enters the page.
And I like the roomm in the fifth panel.

Next page will either be Kai, trying to get Morro out of Lloyds body (episode one from "Posession") or Lloyd nearly dying after the battle against his father (in, I think it was "Sons of Garmadon" or "Hunted". I alltimes mix up the two of them...)

Do you have any more cool scenes, I could use for practice? (Wouldn't complaine, if there was a bit Greenflame in it. I kind of ship them, but friendzone. Or about Lloyd in general. Or Zane. Kailor... Forgett it! Doesn't matter, who is in the scenes. Let it be one of the team and it probably is amazing anyway... ).

Bye, Alice 🙃

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