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Book name: I witnessed a murder
Author: themysteryisme975
Chapters read: (1/1)
Genre: Mystery/Thriller
Book status: Completed

Cover :4.5/5
I felt the cover was amazing! It had the mystery, drama vibes and I loved it at the first sight. It's super simple and I like it. It's classy too!

Title : 4.5/5
The title suited the story well, And I loved it. It was good and had all the vibes required.

Blurb : 0.5/5
Okaaaaaaaay, now comes the problems,
First of all the blurb should contain something about the book. I felt your blurb was totally blank and not at all filled. Use some quotations, dramatic dialogues, scenes from the book and give a short summary about who the book is, what the book is about, why should the reader read it? Yours was blank and the first line was “This is a short mystery/thriller story. It contains everything one needs for having fun.” I don’t think anyone would be intrigued enough to read it without a proper blurb. Everything one needs for having fun? What does that even mean? I am being honest with you, I don’t know what you are talking about. There was no summary and if this book came to my hands for reading, I would have rejected it because of the blurb, many books don’t have a proper blurb which makes them boring. I would ask you to generate a proper one rather than just say, you will have fun reading this book. So, please do change it. Also, there were grammatical errors in the blurb.

Plot : 3/10
About the plot. What is the plot about?
It was short.
It just had the beginning of the thing!
Where is the actual story?
I was so disappointed in it. The story was progressing well, the person saw a person get killed, the murderer saw the person who saw the murder. It was so confusing. Try to rewrite the whole thing. Because it had nothing other than a person being killed and a person seeing it. What happened next? I did not understand any of the concepts you tried revealing during the story. Try to rewrite it and give it a proper read again. Try writing an ending. Continue it and write the rest of the thing. Sorry to say, I was totally disappointed in the book.

Hook & Flow : 1.5/5
It was a oneshot and it was super short, I don’t think it can be reviewed on the basis of hook or flow because it had neither, I think you need to work on the whole thing again and try and get the book right. Because it has nothing in it for a read.

Writing style & grammar : 4/10
The writing style was quite boring according to me, but I don’t think the grammatical errors are fine - check your spelling and tenses. There was not a lot to check as the story was super duper short and the paragraphs were long winded in spacing and it was like, you were trying to make it longer without writing the thing.

Opening paragraph : 1/5
The opening paragraph had ONLY ONE LINE. And that line was quite intriguing but too cliched in a mystery book. I think you should make it longer and sharper and less cliched and more unique.

Overall impression : 1.5/10
I think this book needs to be rewritten, taking an effort to redo the whole thing. Write the ending properly, it should be unique and there should be a reason for reading the book taking the time. Please do it properly. I am sorry for the harsh words, but please do look at my suggestions and improve.

Total marks : 20.5/50

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