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Book: Reincarnation of Genius
Author: Anora0901
By MichelleManisha

Cover- 4/4
I love the colour contrast and the simplicity of it. The fonts are just great and I would not suggest you change it ever.

Title: 1/2
Grammar mistake it should be 'Reincarnation of a Genius'

Blurb: 3/4
The starting blurb was great and the idea of giving the readers a small sneak peek of the story was great too, however, it had grammar mistakes along with odd sentences.
'Hazel didn't liked'- Hazel didn't like.
'that the man in front was affecting her..." -- Hazel didn't like the man in front of her who was affecting her more than it seemed.

First chapter: 4/10
Prologue,
Starting of the chapter, 'in a dark dungeon' is a really bad way to describe a dungeon. It seems you are describing the surroundings in gameplay. A dungeon could be anything like it could be dry and dusty, walls made of stones, no windows etc. Or, it could be nasty like, insects crawling on the damp floor, small shrubs sprouting out of the walls. Human skeletons laying on the floor. So, describe it. Don't just leave it as Dark Dungeon.
Last sentence was odd. Her bruises were in the least form not tended to. I don't understand what you mean by this.
'None can deny that from the tip of Sapphire's....everything was perfect.'
This whole paragraph felt odd. I read it three times but I could not understand what it meant. Maybe, you were complimenting the cousin but your formation of sentences is a bit weird. I gather English is not your first language but to improve on it, you have to read.
'Rendering her unable to be completely conscious yet unconscious ' -- you have already said unable to be conscious then you don't need again to add 'unconscious'

The part where they were in their previous life could be briefed a bit more.
'I-I'm Ha-z-el Pa-r-k?' First of all, when you stammer or have difficulty remembering something, you don't talk like that. If I were her, I would say, 'I... I–I'm Hazel. Hazel Park?"

(...) Is for taking a break probably for remembering or examining.

How did she know, she was reincarnated? Won't she be a bit of confusion? Then when memories come by, she will have questions. Then she will have a series of notions. After confirming that she is in another era, she will be confirmed. So, it is a bit of a long term process. I would suggest you write it briefly.

Next chapters: 7/10
Ep 1 part 1,
I loved the sense of smell you have put in the chapter 1. Just a few missing determiners and prepositions such as 'the morning birds', 'slithered toward the sweating figure'.

This was a smooth read, the sentences were structured profoundly. However, I sensed a lack of emotions as in she woke up with a nightmare haunting her, she ought to have some physical traits to put her into distress.

Ep 1 part 2,
'Reason being' is incorrect. If you are going to put being then you have to restructure the sentence as 'Reason being in the possession of good features as well as an adoptive heir of Cassandra Park...'
But for your sentence, 'Reasons were, firstly, her features were...'

'Giver her any face' sounds weird. Even if it is a phrase, you have to look out for grammar. Either it would be, 'They would definitely not give her face, or they would definitely not be the one to give a face to her.

Wait! Does that mean, the previous self of her was around the recent era?

Grammar: 6/10
There were visibly some mistakes on preposition, tense and punctuation. I have pointed out a few missing determiners. For the rest you have to do it. However, those were trivia as most of the chapters were smoothed out.

Sentence structure and Syntax: 5/10
Compared to Prologue, the rest two chapters were actually very fresh and well-written. But there were a few off putting sentences. Not much, just a bit. I am certain you have potential to work on your sentences.

Pace and Flow: 6/10
The end of the prologue seemed a bit rushed. As the baby came out immediately without pain. You have briefed a single sentence 'her body was in burning pain' but that is not enough. When a baby comes out, the pain is so intense that you want to die or you want your belly to rip open. It's really painful. You have to describe it before the baby comes out. Remember, before the pain starts, water breaks in the belly.

Consistency: 8/10
I like how you have structured the consistency as if it didn't leave anything.

Characters: 7/10
I would have given it another two points if there was a bit more description on each character. Not like, he has blue eyes and all. Like, when Devon is tensed his face should show some expression or if he has a poker face then his body should show that.

Mrs Han, I like this one as I have a character like her. Lol

Hazel, I love how she is strong willed and despite the business is in ruins, she is determined to pull it together.

Plot: 8/10
Well, I am very pleased with the plot as it has a conspiracy and the whole book is not entirely on romance. There  is tension and there is a business mood Hazel bore so I am looking forward to it.

My opinion: (7/10)
Just develop your writing. I get it English is not your first language, but there is nothing that learning can't teach us. For starters, read books that are good in grammar and sentence structure. Reading improves our knowledge so when we write we unconsciously write good things if you regularly read good books, you will definitely see the change in your writing style.

Also, read articles on creative writing and watch videos. It will help you. If you can, study grammar because you have a good grip on it but it will be great if you improve.

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